Whispers

Mar 01, 2009 11:39


Title: Whispers
Author: DarkBlysse
Word Count: 121
Rating: G
Characters: Alphonse
Summary: Whispers can be so haunting...
Warnings: Implied Ed/Hei and implied Elricest. Not really any spoilers, unless you haven't seen the movie.

A/N: Really working outside of my comfort zone here, for a few reasons. One: I like writing longer fics, not little drabbles like this. I always get scared that I just, like, utterly fail when I have so few words to work with. Two: Oh, God... fluff and sap is not my forté.  "orz

~~~;~;~;~;~;~;~;~~~

A whisper of a name across my mind as I sleep.

Alfons...

Your voice sounds... odd as you say my name. Not quite as it should, tinted with some strange accent. But then I see him lying next to you, and not me. Him in your arms, and not me. I whimper softly in my sleep, clutching the blankets tighter to my chest. It's not my name...

I love you.

My eyes ease open, tears already flowing out as I blink heavily. Hot across my cheeks, only making me feel lonelier without you to wipe them away and comfort me.

“I love you too, Brother...” I whisper, hoping it might just drift through your thoughts, as your words drift through mine.

~~~;~;~;~;~;~;~;~~~

A/N: This was my entry for prompt 2 at FMA_Fic_Contest--Whisper.   Didn't win this week, but I don't mind at all.  I'm proud as heck of this little gem. <3

contest, fma, oneshot

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