fic: who i was, from the start
Yuri had two books opened at her dining room table, scratching away at filling paper.
"You looking for another poem for me?"
There was a bag of dried apricots in Yoona's hands, the plastic crinkling whenever she took one out.
"Not really, because I'm scared you're going to become completely conceited," Yuri replied, ducking her head to hide a ( Read more... )
"You looking for another poem for me?"
There was a bag of dried apricots in Yoona's hands, the plastic crinkling whenever she took one out.
"Not really, because I'm scared you're going to become completely conceited," Yuri replied, ducking her head to hide a ( Read more... )
Only by two days, haha.
You are running out of chapters!
I'm not! xD I'm currently finishing up 31. I think it'll end somewhere around 40 chapters.
But, I think we need more titillation there. Something along the lines of Tiffany noticing Jessica staring at her kissing the guy and opening her eyes and staring back.
That's not really who Tiffany is. Right now, she really doesn't care about Jessica. She doesn't care who she is and what she does and her only purpose in Tiffany's life at the moment is for pure amusement.
...Yoona recoil straight away from the jacket incident, perhaps you could have progressed it to the point where Yuri was touching Yoona back before making Yoona push Yuri away...
It's too much of a Khun scenario. The way I saw it was Yoona couldn't treat Yuri the same way she did Khun. Yoona didn't want to build things up all the while knowing she wouldn't be able to get anywhere in the end. It's my fault, because as the writer, I should have showed those feelings better.
As you probably know, the difference between best friends and lovers is that in one case, they are sleeping with kissing each other.
They'll be breaking out of this rut of "just best friends" soon. I just hope the transition is smooth ;]
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Just kidding lol. Take your time, but don't pull a Robert Jordan, k?
About your comments on the jacket scene.. I never thought about it that way.. =O I was rather hoping Yoona would actually try to give it a shot before hitting that wall again. Looks like Yoona is surer of herself than I thought.
Well, if your ending isn't 5 chapters away, then I suppose you can take your time with the other subplots as well.
Perhaps you can post more than 1 chapter per week? =O This wait is killing me. =P
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Chapter 28 was never supposed to be the end. Once I wanted to introduce Jessica, I knew there was going to be more chapters than 30.
Perhaps you can post more than 1 chapter per week? =O
I could, but some chapters are easier to write than others. This means if I hit a wall, who knows when the next chapter would come out. Isn't it better to have a consistent wait period rather than an irregular and possibly longer one? :]
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