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darkaslay

fic: who i was, from the start

Apr 12, 2010 18:23

Yuri paced anxiously in front of her home insurance company. It would open in less than five minutes but she’d been up since dawn with barely any sleep the night before. All she could think about was moving back into her home. Living with Yoona had been bliss, especially the past week or so but she couldn’t wait to be in much more familiar ( Read more... )

yuri, yoona, snsd, fiction

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darkaslay April 15 2010, 18:07:58 UTC

You wrote this two days ago. I hope you wiped off that grin by now :p

roisoleil1505 April 13 2010, 17:10:23 UTC

HAHAHAHAHA~ I got tricked on the marco polo part... you trickster, HAHAHAHA~ I love it XDD~ /smiling like an idiot

darkaslay April 15 2010, 18:12:10 UTC

Everyone was expectin' some sexy tiemz. You weren't the only one tricked :p

roisoleil1505 April 15 2010, 18:15:08 UTC

*pouts*

but I actually like this twist better... XDD~

darkaslay April 15 2010, 19:26:04 UTC

Oh, well then that's good :D

Maybe everyone liked it more too, lol. They're just too chicken to admit they like the cute stuff too :p

del_87 April 13 2010, 18:25:41 UTC

this chapter is cute...

sometimes i was wondering what is Tiffany to Yuri..? it seems like Yuri has something for her.. but i still hope for YoonYul's happy ending tho.. hoho

darkaslay April 15 2010, 18:15:05 UTC

Yuri was with Tiff for a very long time, so even if Yoona is Yuri's childhood love, getting rid of someone like Tiff from your mind is going to be difficult.

Have faith in Yuri though :}

dinny_ April 13 2010, 19:41:46 UTC

This chapter is :D

Haha, Yuri's so sweet. Ninja'd that flower and note into Yoong's butt pocket and all. Always getting caught and punished lol...

Man, Yoong and Yul were so hot for each other and were doing some visual/mental raping just before they got together. What happened? D: Not even makeoutsss now. ;_;

I feel that there's going to be some sort of explosion because of the tension between Tiffany and Yoona. Yuri needs to be more sensitive to Yoona, I think. And Yoona needs to learn how to just say what's on her mind.

Poor kids, they just need to jump into bed, all three of them. That can be Tiffany and Yoona's way of shaking hands and calling a truce. :D And perhaps Yoona can learn a thing or two from Tiffany ;D

dinny_ April 13 2010, 19:42:34 UTC

Oh yes, I also approve of this chapter's length. :D

dinny_ April 13 2010, 19:50:01 UTC

Eff, I keep leaving things out.

...and if you’re not careful,” Yoona said, grinning smugly as she snatched the card from Yuri’s hands, “you can go to jail.”

Is it just me or was Yoona trying to imply something here? I thought something awesome going to happen after she said that. XD Oh well, there's always next chapter...and the chapters after that. Heheh...

darkaslay April 15 2010, 18:21:30 UTC

What happened? D: Not even makeoutsss now. ;_;

Lol, you gotta give them time. Yoona just broke up with Khun. Yuri is just being ~considerate~.

Poor kids, they just need to jump into bed, all three of them.

This seems to be a growing popular opinion >D

The chapters aren't going to go beyond ~5000 words, like this one, but most of them don't go below ~3000 from now on. I didn't know you guys liked such long chapters.

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wazzzabii April 13 2010, 21:09:41 UTC

Ah this chapter was long and so full of win~ :D

Completely fooled me into think it was Yoong that Yuri called first D:< lol (Now I'm just wondering when and if Yuri asks Yoona to move into her house! 8D)

Finally! They're together officially~ Makes me feel all warm and fuzzeh~ Gosh, so many adorable friggen YoonYul moments I almost dieddddd!!! The garden and the library nyaahahahaa~ lol xD

Though I was half expecting some naughty action to happen, I loved the moments when Yuri gave Yoona those sweet, innocent kisses! :D teeheehee

17th hurry up and come!!!!!!!!!!!!

darkaslay April 15 2010, 18:28:23 UTC

Everyone seems to be waiting for the moment YoonYul pounce on each other xD It's 'kay, I don't blame you guys. It's been 20 chapters, it makes sense something should happen. But for now you have to make due with the cutesy stuff :p

roisoleil1505 April 16 2010, 07:08:08 UTC

oh it's 20 chapters already? lol.. ok, I gotta hand it to you then, lol..
I never really read fics past 15 chaps, coz I got bored easily...

you're officially one of my fav writers XDD~
*throws confetti *

don't stop writing :3

darkaslay April 16 2010, 20:25:30 UTC

I'm hoping to have this done by 40 chapters. Once I have it finished, I'll either combine chapters or shorten the time between updates :D

you're officially one of my fav writers XDD~

Aw, thank you! :]