White Collar fic, Peter/Neal

[daria234]

Title: Reply

Comments

[ivorysilk]

This was fantastic--I have to say, I love all your fics where you deal with the issues of trust and consent between Neal and Peter, and this was no exception. Your Neal is always so conflicted and you draw that so well. Thank you!

I know it's juvenile, but yay! I'm first!

[daria234]

Thanks so much! That feedback means a lot. :)

[hesselives]

oh, boys. all the complications between them -- you've pinned them down, definitely. and your dialogue -- i adore it! <3

[daria234]

Thank you!!! I love their complicated relationship - but "oh, boys" is definitely the right response imo :)

Thanks for your comment!!

[c8h7n3o2]

I loved it! I love how you write their struggles and pain so well and intertwine them beautifully with the schmexiness!

Good job! XD

[daria234]

Thank you!!! I'm really glad it worked for you!

[rabidchild]

Man, I love your writing. You achieve such a level of emotional truth and sensitivity that I know I will never achieve and I hope you never, ever stop.

So, more specific to the story: I love how you’ve interpreted the betrayal of the last scenes in UTR - so smart. Both men’s feelings and motivations are so true to their characters - well done! And that Neal can’t sleep without Peter in the bed, even though he’s not over that betrayal - it’s such an ache, you know? And that last paragraph just killed me ded!

[daria234]

Wow, I am like flailing at how sweet your compliment is! (Am ignoring the part where you self-deprecate because you have to know that your fic rocks like nobody's business, y/y? :) But I am so glad this fic worked for you :) :) Thank you for such a nice comment!

[sahiya]

I feel so sad for both of them here. Beautifully done!

[daria234]

Thanks so much!