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daria234

White Collar fic

Sep 29, 2010 03:24

Title: Just for me
Fandom: White Collar
Pairing: Peter/Neal
Summary: After fantasizing about each other for so long, they're finally building a relationship. But they're surprised at the twists their fantasy lives still take.

( fic here )

fic, slash, peter burke, white collar, fanfic, fanfiction, neal caffrey

Comments 16

misura September 29 2010, 09:51:21 UTC

Loved how this plays with their relationship and the matter of trust - both fantasies offered intrigueing glimpses in their minds and how they see the other.

This line must be my favorite though: He [Neal] had an oddly consistent sense of self for a highly adaptable con artist. <3

daria234 September 30 2010, 02:13:57 UTC

Thanks so much :) I'm glad their perspectives on their trust for the other worked!

elrhiarhodan September 29 2010, 12:50:41 UTC

THIS: And Peter especially loves the muscles of Neal's back, tensing up or relaxing depending on what Peter does. There are, perhaps, the most honest part of Neal. Certainly the most unguarded.

This hits my kinks so freakin' hard - you have no idea. I've aways had a thing for men's backs and shoulders. Probably dates back to the Aramis cologne ads from the late '70s.

Anyway - I adore this elaborate and surprising fantasy life that the boys are building for themselves and each other.

Delish, darling. Just delish.

daria234 September 30 2010, 02:20:40 UTC

Thanks :) Always happy to hit a kink ;)

Now I want to look at those ads. I hate the smell of Aramis cologne but I wouldn't mind seeing some old commercials, lol.

Amazing ursula4x September 29 2010, 13:44:43 UTC

Very sexy and interesting thoughts from both of them.

Re: Amazing daria234 September 30 2010, 02:17:45 UTC

:) Thanks so much!!!!

photoash September 29 2010, 16:21:53 UTC

I'm almost speechless!! This is freaking amazing O_O omg!!! *hugs*

You were so clever and fun and sneaky with it :) Neal's "game" for them to play, that's so ingenious and so *you* <3 I love how your mind works!!

I love how both want to keep a little part of their fantasies just for themselves even if they think they could probably share them. :)

daria234 September 30 2010, 02:14:59 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. See, I told you it would be sleepy!sex sort of. Not really, but close :)

monkeyonthelam October 9 2010, 18:37:10 UTC

The two of them know each other so well. I love that Neal likes to think that he would win every time when he knows in actuality that it would be the exact opposite. If there was more to this fic, i would love to read it.

daria234 October 9 2010, 19:37:32 UTC

Thanks! There are many fics before it starting at the link at the top, and hopefully, there might be another part of this series.

Glad you liked it :)