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Discretion (Chapter Three) by Diane (Nathan/Haley) Strong Adult Rated

Aug 10, 2006 18:21

Title: Discretion
Author: Diane
Pairing: Nathan/Haley
Rating: Strong Adult Rated
Disclaimer: Nope, I don’t own a thing!
Word Count (for the complete story): 4,698
Summary: Some things aren’t always what they seem…
Author’s Note: This story, which has been written for The 'I won, I won, I won!' Challenge at dareyouto_write, marks a bit of a departure for me and I ( Read more... )

nathan/haley, discretion, egyptian_pixie

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starcrossed26 August 10 2006, 17:32:06 UTC

Heeheehee. I knew it :) Awww this was so cute and hot and sweet and...sigh. Loved it! Wonderful job :)

bluelilyrose August 10 2006, 17:33:44 UTC

Thanks, Nicole, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)

nathan4haley August 10 2006, 17:41:09 UTC

*squeee!!!* Now that was amazing!!! I loved the way you played out this fic!!! and brilliantly written too!! My my Nathan and Haley are saucy minx's arent they!!! hahaa!!!

bluelilyrose August 10 2006, 17:42:38 UTC

Thanks, Nats, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)

And yep, in my head, those two are as saucy as hell. *lol*

medineamory August 10 2006, 17:49:33 UTC

Oh, Diane! I only got on LJ to see if you had updated, and here I am smiling like a dork. LOL! I just don't want this story to end, it is just one perfect edition of 'The 'I won, I won, I won! Challenge'!

I love how you have managed to make this chapter more of a parenting chapter than hot; it was such a normal reaction from Haley's side, from both sides. And the conclusion is not bad at all, they get to have a little more privacy.

Thank you for sharing this story with us. *hugs*

bluelilyrose August 11 2006, 19:36:41 UTC

Thanks, Medine, I'm really glad you liked it and that you think it fits in with the current challenge.

I figured I had to have a little bit of non-smut in there somewhere. *lol*

You're very welcome. Thank you for reading it and commenting. *hugs*

katerina84 August 10 2006, 18:37:47 UTC

Taht was great. I really like it :)

bluelilyrose August 11 2006, 19:27:46 UTC

Thanks, I'm happy to hear it. :)

dearlydevoted August 10 2006, 19:23:29 UTC

I'm so glad you posted it! It went really good with the theme of this challenge. There was never a doubt that you'd handle it the way you did. Two things that I especially loved about it were 1. the fact that they were parents of three little kids, I just find that so adorable; and 2. I loved NH's kinky side in this lol, you are such a smut genius, this is one of the hottest fics I've read so far, hands down.

bluelilyrose August 11 2006, 19:33:13 UTC

I'm glad, too, Viv. :) And thanks again for your help with this when I initially showed it to you and the other girls. You all helped to put my mind at rest.

I always love reading NH married with little kids so I couldn't resist doing it with this fic and I'm glad it went over well with you and everyone else.