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IN WHICH BRIAN KINNEY DARES THE WORLD, PART 1

Sep 01, 2006 22:41

Title: In Which Brian Kinney Dares the World
Written By: knittedshadow
Timeline: Various Seasons
Rating: R
Warnings: Slight reference to child abuse.
Summary: When Brian is ten he’s quiet and lives in a silent household.
Author Notes: Cowlip owns all. Thanks to my lovely beta for all her help during writing, you shall get proper named glory when the anonymous- ( Read more... )

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knittedshadow September 11 2006, 17:30:39 UTC

Did that make sense? :D

Yeah, kinda, sorta, lol. When I was writing it and trying to explain it to besame_bj I was like, so the first part of the second section of the second bit of the... wait. Very confusing.

But glad you enjoyed it :)

sian265 September 2 2006, 02:53:53 UTC

Oh shit! That ending kicks you in the gut! Powerful job.

knittedshadow September 11 2006, 17:31:50 UTC

That ending kicks you in the gut! Powerful job.

Causing my reader's pain, it's what I always aim for, :) Glad you ... uh, enjoyed it?

anna_katarina September 2 2006, 04:12:33 UTC

God, what an impact, from the quiet domestic scene to- a whole other kind of domestic scen... It's just WOW!

I loved this story and I'm going to guess... Suzvoy. It got the Suzvoy feeling anyway.

knittedshadow September 11 2006, 17:34:11 UTC

I'm going to guess... Suzvoy. It got the Suzvoy feeling anyway

Omg! Such a compliment. Wrong but yay!

God, what an impact

Yeah, gut-punchy was kind of my aim, glad it worked :)

sonofabiscuit77 September 2 2006, 21:08:07 UTC

Your description of teenage Brian was immaculate in his restrained fury and his prayers to make himself stronger were particularly resonating. The description of a 3 year old going from bundle of joy to screaming monster was scarily accurate and Brian's reaction again perfectly in character and very powerful. Love it.

knittedshadow September 11 2006, 17:36:31 UTC

Your description of teenage Brian was immaculate in his restrained fury

I love teenage Brian to an unhealthy degree but he's quite difficult to write, I'm glad you think I've pulled it off :)

bundle of joy to screaming monster was scarily accurate

3-year old nieces are not put on this world for no reason. Let's call her ... my inspiration.

rosengirl September 3 2006, 15:31:19 UTC

Very well written.

Off to part 2 !

knittedshadow September 11 2006, 17:36:58 UTC

Thank you, glad you enjoyed :)