Friday Night Lights Fic: The World Outside the Windows

[daphnaea]

For the first two months of college, Landry comes to visit her.  He shows up on weekends and they go down to the Alamo Freeze and someone makes fun of him and he blows it off, so it’s kind of like nothing’s changed.  Except that everything has.

Tyra doesn’t understand the extent of that everything, however, until the first time she visits him

Comments

[miss_december]

I really, really loved your fic!

you kept Tyra tough in every way she is tough, but tender to her interaction with Landry, complete with her insecurities. I love how you didn't change Landry but let him be who he is around other guys who are much like he is. I can never get enough of Tyra in a fic, let alone Tyra & Landry together.

one hell of a prizefighter for a first fic! I just wrote my first, too, and I was also in a Tyra-no spoilers state of mind.

:)

[sisredlo]

This is wonderful. You definitely got inside Tyra's head. I love your phrasing too, especially this part: "As soon as their shirts come off it all feels comfortable again, and she still hasn’t gotten over the way he touches her, like he can’t quite believe he’s allowed to, like he can’t decide whether to take his time and learn every curve of her body or hurry in case it might be taken away." Lovely.

Oh, and this? "But like metaphysically. In the throwdown of pure awesome. You are like the heavyweight belt holder.” Landry would so totally say something like that.

First?

[anonymous]

This is pretty high caliber for a first. Thanks for sharing!

Kizz

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[psuedo_catalyst]

This is one of the sweetest things I think I've ever read. Thank you so much for sharing!