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Challenge #3: Mistake

Apr 16, 2010 01:14

Challenge #3: Mistake
Rating: T
Warnings: Some blood, nothing too gory.
Characters: Zevran, Taliesin, Rinna

( Zevran makes the biggest mistake of his life... )

challenge 3, challenge mistakes, art, character: zevran

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sian_shoe April 16 2010, 05:17:48 UTC

oh, sad:(
so very sad :(

payroo April 16 2010, 05:20:01 UTC

Wow, that was a prompt response! ^^'
Yeah, this scene has been haunting me ever since I had that Zev convo in game. I'm glad it's finally out of my head now...

tasmen April 16 2010, 06:17:04 UTC

There is something about this scene that sticks in your head and just won't leave until you do something about it. That happened with me when I wrote my piece about the same subject.

I love how you've drawn this. The contract between black, white and red is a very nice touch and could have been taken into cheesy land. This is FAR from cheesy.

And her reaching for his feet? Uggggh. So perfect.

payroo April 16 2010, 16:11:43 UTC

Thanks! Glad to know it's not cheesy! :) I always worry that the red/black/white color scheme will look Hot Topic-esque, ugh!

Haha, some evil part of my brain thought that was why Zev wanted new boots after his last mission... ;)

tasmen April 16 2010, 16:27:10 UTC

You shame me for I wish I had thought of the boots thing. It is perfection. I can TOTALLY see it. Oh man..Zevspiration hitting hard, lady!

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