[Star Trek TOS] Gravity

[danse_amore]

Title: Gravity
Wordcount: ~1,000
Pairing/Characters: Kirk/Spock
Rating: R? I guess?
Disclaimer: I don't own them!
Summary: Written for help_haiti  auction. I won't explain the prompt, because it is spoilery.
Note: I...am not entirely sure I am happy with this. I may end up rewriting the prompt. But for now, here it is.

Comments

[missyousofaar]

::loves and loveees:: ♥

It's beautiful and wonderful and. ♥ ___ ♥

[vampyvet]

I understand why you're not in love with it, it kinda feels a little lacking. Maybe it just needs to be fleshed out more, I think you spoiled us with the last one...
Oh and this line:
Kirk's smirk grows. "Am I take from that that this was premeditated, Mr. Spock?"
It's not quite right....
Loved some more Spock & Kirk from you though

[macbyrne]

So vivid and intense; really liked it. Nice job.

[boshums]

Sensual, understated and well-written.
Makes me miss the rain drops.

[margarks]

awww! romantic and wonderfully descriptive!