How to Tie a Tie

Aug 12, 2008 19:23


Title: How to Tie a Tie
Summary: Daniel forgets how to tie a tie. Charlotte reminds him. Angst/fluff (flangst?).
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Daniel/Charlotte
Spoilers: Season 4
Words: 809
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost. Pity.
A/N: Fluff, because today is Tuesday, and if Tuesday started with an F, it would sound cool. Like Milkshake Monday. Review, ( Read more... )

fanfiction, dan/charlotte

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failegaidin August 13 2008, 00:34:10 UTC
That was just so HEARTBREAKING. The image of him standing there trying to remember how to tie his tie...and the fact that she doesn't ever have to talk about, she's just there to remind him when he forgets. Seriously awesome.

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danlotteshipper August 13 2008, 23:54:15 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I hope I didn't break your heart too much. =)

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jenthegypsy August 13 2008, 00:45:01 UTC
*reminds self to go shopping for Daniel icon*

Oh, I just love this! It's so Daniel, so Charlotte and so bittersweet. I don't usually warm up to Charlotte, but I like her just fine here - great fic, very sweet among the sadness. &hearts

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danlotteshipper August 14 2008, 00:15:42 UTC
Thank you! =D I'm glad I didn't make Charlotte too unlikeable or anything in this fic. :)

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danlotteshipper August 14 2008, 00:18:24 UTC
Thanks so much! =D I'm glad ya liked it, and the title!

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o_deanna August 13 2008, 16:41:05 UTC
Beautiful! Oh this was so, so lovely!

"He'll forget his own name before he forgets Charlotte's" - Aieeeeee! So sweet!

I love how Dan doubts everything - "He can't be sure if that would be classified as a kiss, or maybe she just stood up too fast." This made me laugh so much, fondly though!

You captured them both brilliantly. Charlotte especially, not many fics I've read have captured her even half so well.

Wonderful work, as always! *hugs* xxx

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danlotteshipper August 14 2008, 00:21:00 UTC
Thank you so much! I love it that you quoted my fic, so I know what ya liked. :D I'm glad you think I pulled Charlotte off in this, too. Thanks!

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saved29 August 14 2008, 16:35:51 UTC
you are back!
lovely fic.
Don't worry Dan; she will be there to remind you.

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danlotteshipper August 14 2008, 21:01:57 UTC
Yup. :D I hope to get back to writing more often now. Thank you! :)

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hey_a_newday August 15 2008, 00:52:05 UTC
Really nice! It was sad, but just so pretty at the same time!
Another great story from you, as always!

For everything else, Charlotte will be there to remind him. Of course she will.

Very good ending, you shouldn't have been iffy for this!
Loved it!!!

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danlotteshipper August 15 2008, 20:12:00 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I'm happy that you enjoyed it! :D

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