Pinholes in the Sky

[danlotteshipper]

Title: Pinholes in the Sky
Summary: Daniel and Charlotte see a shooting star.
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Dan/Charlotte
Spoilers: Season 4, up to the end of Something Nice Back Home.
Words: 744
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost. Pity.

A/N: I'm tired of "A ______" titles. I'm sure you are, too. So I have decided to switch it up a bit. *pokes title* Also, it

Comments

[o_deanna]

Oh my goodness. This was utterly perfect! Completely beautiful. You've captured them so well. I love the awkwardness between them and the ending was gorgeous. Thank you for sharing!

I wish I could write fic. I've been planning on drawing some fanart for ages, but I've got caught up in a fandom competition and I have deadlines ;__;. I made a Dan/Charlotte fanmix over the weekend though :D. There needs to be more Charladay love! x

[o_deanna]

PS. I love your stories, would it be OK if I friended you? I'm also a friend of the lovely lady_boromir :D x

[danlotteshipper]

Aw, thank you so much! You made my day. =)

Well, if you ever get around to writing a Dan/Charlotte fic, I'll be sure to read it. Absolutely. =) And... Fanmix. I've never even heard of what that is. =P I know, pathetic. Don't make fun of the semi-newbie! Anyway, I'd love to go and check it out! And I agree, people are way too deprived of Charladay love.

Yes, I'd love to have a new buddy! I'll add you right back, if that's good with you.

[o_deanna]

Ahh I'm so glad I made your day! You made mine too with your lovely story :).

Sorry to confuse you! A fanmix is like a soundtrack of songs that remind you of a show, or a character or a pairing. This is the first I've ever made, so I'm a newbie too! They're just a collection of songs that I like and I think relate to Dan/Charlotte...I posted some of the lyrics with the album.

Oh, I'd love you to add me back, thank you! I love making new friends! ♥

[shennydenny]

Awww. I really like Daniel, even as much of a jerk he was back in Oxford, lol. Good job!

[danlotteshipper]

Thanks you! =) I agree, Daniel could have been a bit nicer to our lovely Desmond at Oxford. Still love him, though, of course.

[lady_boromir]

That was so adorable! I can totally see this happening after Something Nice Back Home! There were lines in here that made me squee because I could just hear them saying them! You write them both SO well, making their relationship absolutely believable and their dialogue is never wooden, always right on the mark which is a difficult thing to do! XD But I'll stop fangirl-ing now and just say I loved it! :D

[danlotteshipper]

Aw, thank you so much! That means a bunch to me. =) I love when I can hear the dialogue being spoken when I read other stories, and it's flattering to hear that a person can do that with something I wrote. It's not so bad hearing voices in your head. =P I'm loving all the compliments, thank you. =)

[sitar_tattoo]

In a word: SQQQQQQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! =D

That was adorable. Well-tackled, too - it made sense how all the emotions worked out as part of the situation... and that bit of Daniel laughing quietly to himself, I dunno, I just saw Jeremy Davies doing it.

If this is jumbled, it's because I have an exam in ten minutes and I have no time to make a good critique. Needless to say, if there's no Dan/Charlotte action in the finale this week, I'll probably die inside.

[danlotteshipper]

In two words: THANK YOU! =)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it and found it believable enough. I do try.

Well, it's a little late, but good luck on your exam! =) I feel the same way about the finale. We deserve some Charladay goodness.