AuthorDianaspr aka Irisazul
Title Cant think of one
Pairing VALA/Daniel and some VALA/CAM
RatingG
Warning/Spoilers just one
Vala found herself in front of Mitchell’s office; as she paced back and forth making angry gestures with her hands and talking to herself.
Mitchell’s head poked out of the room.“What!!!” he almost yelled as Vala jumped.
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And you say in the header that there is a spoiler but don't give any details?
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And if I missed something, then thats my fault, I'm in the process of studying for my finals.
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But it's just... ack, can't think of a tactful way of saying this. There's a lot that needs fixing; very basic stuff. And, yes, God, it's amazing for someone for whom English is a second language; no way I could write anything in a foreign language myself and I applaud that, but when a story is written it has to be judged on its own merits and it's up to the author and the beta to make it readable.
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