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yahtzee63 in daniel_betty

Fic: "Friends With Benefits" (part 3 of 5) NC17

Nov 10, 2010 18:24

And now we come to part three, which fulfills the schmoop_bingo prompt "back rub." Hope you enjoy:

( Friends With Benefits, Part Three )

fan fiction (all authors), fan fiction: yahtzee63

Comments 20

pinkpeachz November 11 2010, 00:38:27 UTC

HOThothothot

yahtzee63 November 11 2010, 01:26:21 UTC

bonesfirst November 11 2010, 00:44:44 UTC

I have to tell you again how I luv this fanfic. I look foward everynight reading this before I go to bed. definately great read can't for part four

yahtzee63 November 11 2010, 01:26:52 UTC

So glad you're enjoying it! Part Four will be along tomorrow.

karlamartinova November 11 2010, 00:45:32 UTC

I am not sure if I told you this before but I adore your writing!!

yahtzee63 November 11 2010, 01:27:06 UTC

Thanks muchly! :)

dnbmeade November 11 2010, 01:35:58 UTC

I love this. I can't wait for tomorrow. :) The end with phone call to Marc and Amanda....hilarious. I could see that happening on the show.

yahtzee63 November 11 2010, 03:22:38 UTC

Thanks so much! Things take a turn tomorrow. :D

dnbmeade November 11 2010, 03:24:31 UTC

Ok!! You really got me curious.. What kind of turn would that be? LOL.

dnbmeade November 11 2010, 03:28:52 UTC

Ok!! I'm just guessing but I'm thinking that Marc and Amanda are going to catch Daniel coming back down the stairs.. I could be wrong.. but doesn't hurt to guess...as for being the last time..I think not!!! LOL . This is just hot!!!

anneraw November 11 2010, 06:30:30 UTC

Each chapter gets a little more intimate, a little more explicit. Holy moly, what kind of EPIC are we in for by Friday!? Seems like Denial Ain't Just a River in Egypt here, though--this bullshit Betty's thinking about it just being the sex is going to bubble over just like that champagne did two sessions ago. It's clear to me that they aren't simply friendly benefactors because the level of intimacy and tenderness is just too high. That, and the eagerness to make sure the other is pleased. Epic-ly pleased. It's the same thing that led so many viewers to see "more" to the Daniel/Betty friendship, relationship, whatever. It was not a regular platonic relationship. It was more emotional, deeper, sweeter. These two are getting all confused and derailed by the good sex, but it's really not the sex that's driving the intimacy here ( ... )

yahtzee63 November 11 2010, 15:07:20 UTC

Thanks so much! You are definitely calling out one of the things I wanted most with this story, which was to show how close they are -- how the sex, good as it is for them, is mostly a new avenue to express the intimacy they already have, one of the few ways they have left to get even closer. ITA that the tenderness between Daniel and Betty was the single biggest shippy element to their canon relationship, from the get0go.

Thank you again for the awesome FB, and I hope you will enjoy the rest!