Bloodstream: Under Your Skin part 7/7

[dangerous_story]

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PART 7:

Tonight I'ma let you be the captain
Tonight I'ma let you do your thing, yeah
-Rude Boy, Rihanna
"Please, tell me this will not always happen when we move. I'm not sure I can handle it." Adam told Tommy as they collapsed in front of their TV, and Adam turned it on

Comments

[pyrosgf]

Okay I really like this, but I'm a tad confused now. At the beginning it seemed like since Adam was much younger he couldn't tolerate the sun and yet he went out with Mina to save Tommy. Is it that he couldn't tolerate the sun or that he found it annoying or was sensitive to it?

One other question, how much time had passed between the first encounter with Tommy and the present? I was trying to get a feel on the ages of everyone.

It's funny, I normally don't notice stuff like this in fics, but with it being vampires I get all curious.

[dangerous_47]

Oh, I guess maybe we forgot to state what the time of the day was. lol. It happened when it was already dark. At least that's always how I saw it. XD

Did you read the ficlets too? hmm. Sorry if that was vague, didn't wanna be all THIS MANY YEARS LATER. XD

Maybe like 5 years. We had that mapped somewhere, I think. At least vaguely. There was a long space between first encounter and second encounter, not as long between second and third.

lol. Heh. No problem. I notice little things too.

[pyrosgf]

Ficlets?

Okay that helped clear things up in my head. =D

[dangerous_47]

Yeah, there are three ficlets linked in my masterpost. Two happen before this fic and one happens after this fic. XD

No prob. :3

[pyrosgf]

I'm obviously blind... *goes back to read them*

[dangerous_story]

Heh. It's okay. XD