Comments | dangerous_mind1: OneShot - JaeMin

deftonsita in dangerous_mind1

OneShot - JaeMin - A Second Chance.

Oct 23, 2007 20:28

A Second Chance
Thanks to: enchanted1312
"...And the worst thing was that every time someone asks him about his name,
Max would always say “Changmin” with so much ease that it worried his mother so much more.
She had to correct him each time with ‘Your name is Max’."

( This is my second chance )

!language: english, paring: jaejoong/changmin, *fandom: dbsk

Comments 67

thisistony October 24 2007, 04:33:56 UTC

skjahfkjgkjsdh ONESHOT? How dare you. T___T that is far too awesome to condense into so little. *dies a little inside*

deftonsita October 24 2007, 20:48:15 UTC

i'm... sorr? T_T
glad u like it :3

kurogoma October 24 2007, 04:51:34 UTC

This is so so lovely.

Reincarnation and a second chance at love....Changmin waiting until he was eighteen to go out there and claim his true love, knowing that Jaejoong is out there waiting for him, it's poignant and just amazing.

deftonsita October 24 2007, 20:49:26 UTC

aww~! i like how u describe it x3
Thanks! i'm glad that u like it

theresa_lynne October 24 2007, 05:55:13 UTC

OMG. Wow. Just... this made me cry so much at the end. That was so sad and OMG... *cries on the floor in a ball*

deftonsita October 24 2007, 20:52:25 UTC

but, whyy!!? is a happy jaemin ending!! don't cry! *hands a tissue* T_T

keight_michelle October 24 2007, 12:24:04 UTC

Wow. Just... WOW.

*sniffles* ♥♥♥

deftonsita October 24 2007, 20:53:20 UTC

so... did u like it? :3
♥♥♥♥

butterflybird46 October 24 2007, 13:24:27 UTC

AHHH! write a longer story...you can't leave me hanging!! oh please write a longer story!!!

deftonsita October 24 2007, 20:54:39 UTC

i would totally do more oneshots as a sequel from this story, but first i have to find a betta, so... :(

i'm glad u like it :D

butterflybird46 October 24 2007, 21:07:30 UTC

what is a beta?

deftonsita October 24 2007, 21:22:42 UTC

someone that corrects grammar mistakes :D

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