melodies and remedies

[dandroid]

i just finished the lyrics to this song I've been working on for almost 2 years i think. Not to say that it's great, I just left it and came back to it a lot. Plus i had a very rigid framework of syllables and vowel sounds, and i could never think of anything coherent enough to fit it and make sense, but finally today it worked out.
I put the song up on my daniel christopher song's myspace. it almost sounds alright, with more tweeking, it may be satisfactory!

MELODIES AND REMEDIES

Piece by piece
these melodies
will remedy your disease

I can see
what's right for me
but it doesn't mean i agree

My fall leaves
are withering
and I'm crushing all the dry leaves

Now I see
the future is bleak
so I'm adjusting all of my dreams

I can see what's meant to be
Its everything that we can't see
and melodies can set you free
when you just want to live in peace
melodies and remedies
are all you ever really need
when everything you cant to be
is everything that you can't see