Radiant Dawn
Radiant Dawn
Donghae/Sungmin | R | Troy!AU
1935 Words
Warnings: Incest, Character Death
A/N: Loosely based on the movie/epic Troy. In case it's confusing, Sungmin is casted as Hector, the older prince, Donghae is Paris, the younger one. Heechul is King Agamemnon, Siwon is Achilles, and Sunny is Sungmin's wife. In case you're curious, I originally ( Read more... )
donghae standing on sungmin's feet and tipping up to kiss him as he ties the silk curtains around them reminded me of dream team and hyuk letting min stand on his feet because min was barefoot and the ground was hot. that and hae massaging min's feet. and what do you mean~ i thought the sensual bits still came through, all soft and pretty~ personally i think it's harder investing emotion in sensuality as opposed to, you know, just diving right into it. that balance between dragging/cliche and romantic/believable... the airily hidden feel totally complements the fic :3 secrecy, because forbidden love is the best kind of love. and imagery i strived a tad bit harder for the imagery and colours, and the sun/moon. \o/ i personally liked it, the cycle of sun/moon coming and going, like min being cold and warm, their uncertaintiy about everything comes and goes, blahblahblah. i liked it, even though i hadn't thought of it that way :O
i just realized...so siwon dies because hae shoots his ankle. brb, lmfao.
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