[Yesung-centric Drabble]

Feb 01, 2010 02:11

Title: Stop the Pain // Rewind the Laughter // Pause the Memory // Fast Forward the Trouble // Play the Happiness
Pairing: Main: YeWon; side YeHae, YeHyuk, YeMin friendship; broken YeWook
Genre: Comfort, Angst, Romance
Rating: PG
Summary: 5 Yesung-centric one shots about how Yesung copes with Siwon. Each one 175 words because I wanted to make word ( Read more... )

one shot, drabble

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princess_jaded February 1 2010, 10:11:52 UTC
MINE!

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yeonnie February 1 2010, 10:13:00 UTC
GAH ><
WHY?

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princess_jaded February 1 2010, 10:20:28 UTC
I told you this was good concept. I told you I was envious of it. And now I'm jealous of these drabbles.

Look what you've turned me into.

The first one, I wanted to hit Siwon. I wanted him to feel Yesung's pain. The second, I smiled at Wookie "babysitting" his hyung. The third, the last sentence - damn QMi, and Sungmin's incredibly, ain't he? The fourth, Hyukkie helping him, reminding him that he wasn't alone, it broke my heart a bit and I'm teary-eyed right now. And the last one, I spot a 2woon bias. But it's so fitting the artistic voice finds himself most happy when the music takes control.

Simply wonderful, my Stanley-ah.

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dandanfung February 1 2010, 17:30:11 UTC
I love how your engrish is disintegrating in my eyes. If I were to beta that comment. HEHEHE <333

Err, why are you assuming QMI, hehe~

I'm glad you pointed how I tried having the drabble end with Yesung and music, becuase, it's just fitting, like you said.

<333

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dandanfung February 1 2010, 10:13:45 UTC
Spot for headless_bex

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headless_bex February 1 2010, 15:51:28 UTC
AH. MY HEART.
<333
OHGOD. It's wonderful that Yesung found everything perfect at the end, but I just can't get over the angst.
It's all so perfect. KILLED!yewon and broken!Kyumin... DDDDDDX
Oh you angst master you...
I'M GNA WRITE FLUFF NOW TO MAKE MYSELF FEEL BETTER.
Thank you though, you know how I worship Yesung. <3

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dandanfung February 1 2010, 17:31:33 UTC
Hellyes. Murdered YeWon and half murdered KyuMin <3

It wasn't even THAT angsty, come on. Though I somewhat failed at depicting other sides of Yesung, he was just portrayed as a weak pile of mess with Hae, Min and Hyuk, and to a lesser extent Wook.

But yeah. Glad you liked it; I'll work on you... er... later... yeah I wanna write In Debt tonight.

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headless_bex February 2 2010, 05:09:09 UTC
DDDDDDDDDX
It's okay, layers are hard to place when you're writing drabbles. It's lovely the way it is. <3
You'll... work on me...
??????

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yeonnie February 1 2010, 10:24:19 UTC
WHERE IS SIWON?
WHAT THE HELL DID HE DO TO BABY SUNGIE?

Well, at the end, things are fine, but YeSung had to go through all the pain ):

ANYWAY, GREAT WORK.
I love thei friendship, the way they get each other through ups and downs. Sungie is precious and the rest of SJ will do anything to keep him from getting hurt. How beautiful <3~
babycloud will get better soon, he has his boys there for him.
Hae, Wook, Min, Hyuk ♥

Stop the Pain.
Rewind the Laughter.
Pause the Memory.
Fast Forward the Trouble.
Play the Happiness.
perfect

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dandanfung February 1 2010, 17:37:40 UTC
Errr. Can you stop calling him baby Sungie, becuase he isn't a baby anymore... :S

Yep, the titles of these drabbles are the best part of it, I think~

Thanks for reading this (:

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mara_ciro February 1 2010, 14:49:28 UTC
Like my favorite bestie princess_jaded, you managed to cheer me up after a really horrible/stressful day at the Senate.

Wookie, Hae, Hyuk, Min = LOVE.

Where's Siwon and Kyuhyun? Let me give them both a solid punch in the face for hurting Yesung-oppa and Minnie-oppa...

Stop the Pain.
Rewind the Laughter.
Pause the Memory.
Fast Forward the Trouble.
Play the Happiness.
- I loved how each drabble was called.

Thank you sooo much, Oppa! (or are you my dongsaeng?) You made me smile after a long day of journalism. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

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dandanfung February 1 2010, 17:45:44 UTC
Thanks for the comment, I'm super super super glad this made your day better.

Nooo don't punch Kyuface and Shibrows... ): ): ):

HaeWookHyukMin=<3<3<3<3

Again, thanks for reading hehehe <333

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xloveysx February 1 2010, 17:34:23 UTC
Sungmin and Eunhyuk were so caring...
love them the way they are:)

BUT u make my YeWon separate DX
ahhhh i feel so sad right now TT_TT
u've already broken my heart...

i hate angst but why most YeWon fics now just go with it :-<
so depressed! T^T

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dandanfung February 1 2010, 17:47:09 UTC
It's not all angsty, the ending implied that Yesung had forgiven him?

Unless you want to take it like they're broken, I'm fine with that too, because I thrive on angst. <333

Glad you enjoyed HyukMin <3333

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xloveysx February 1 2010, 17:57:12 UTC
it's just 'forgive'
nothing said that they would be back *sigh*
i tread it while i was listening to 'River flows in you'
nearly cried... :(
i wanna hate u T^T

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dandanfung February 1 2010, 20:14:43 UTC
If you want to hate me, go ahead.

Well, being the not so strong YeWon writer I am (it's getting there, I think), I left the ending ambigous. It's up to you as the reader to piece together what happens.

Aww bby, don't cry... *hugs* I didn't mean to make you cry...

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