How's my driving?

[dancnwithmyself]

After a comment, I've been warned that my Artie has been becoming OOC. I'd really like to know where you feel i can improve him, or if I'm beyond hope =) I'm honestly not afraid of criticism, I'd rather have it than be told after the fact that my beloved boy is OOC.

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