Fic: Screw Angels, This Bell's Ringing In Wings for Me (Slideverse, MCR/FOB, NC-17, Mikey/Pete)

[dancinbutterfly]

Title: Screw Angels, This Bell's Ringing in Wings for Me
Status: Complete
Fandom: Fall Out Boy/My Chemical Romance
Series: Slideverse
Word Count: ~52,800 words
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone in or related to My Chemical Romance or Fall Out Boy.
Pairing: Mikey/Pete, Gerard/Frank, Patrick/Rihanna
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: magic, kidfic, alternate

Comments

[ohourheartsbeat]

hi *waves* okay, so. as you know because miz has a big mouth, i read this yesterday morning. whenever i read something i really, really like i usually wait a little while before reviewing so i dont just OMGFANGIRLSQUEE all over the comment box. but everyonce in a while, when i read something like this, i have to take an entire day to just...think about it. because this is not just fanfiction, bb. not even close.

so anyway, ive spent the last day thinking about this in the back of my head and the one overriding thought i keep having is, i wish somehow the pete that existed back in the summer of like could read this. which i know is kind of fucked up because hes all married with the kid now, and i do believe he loves bronx, but i dont think it really solved anything for him, you know?

okay, im getting all psych 101 here. moving on. before i started i thought this only gonna be a one-sided story, kind of how scrooge gets in that christmas one? and i was OMG HOW CAN SHE EVEN BEGIN TO WRITE THAT and then i realized you were doing TWO petes and my mind possibly shut down for a few minutes.

okay jesus this is getting ridiculously long and i havent even told you how much i love it yet. but for real... I LOVE THIS. LIKE, DONATE A KIDNEY KIND OF LOVE OKAY? MY HEART EYES LET ME SHOW YOU THEM:

♥__♥

and you put frank/gerard in? *clutches heart* i have to say in all of the insane awesomeness going in, the begininng where pete runs away & gerard finds him is possibly my favorite moment in the entire thing. when gerard says hes his brother, i just about cried. i mean, i love a good 'gerard is uncomfortable around pete during summer of like' fic just like everyone else, but i truly believe if pete, ass though he can be, made mikey happy, gerard would welcome him with open arms.

and another one of my favorites parts was (and okay this is gonna sound really horrible) when famous!pete was spending all his time in the basement in the beginning and bronx was bothering him and then hurt himself and pete freaked and yelled. as much as i would have been all AWWWW had famous!pete just given into the family life, lets be honest. it wouldnt happen like that and im so glad you didnt make it that way. that isnt an easy situation by any standard and no one would adapt that quickly.

and yet another depressing part im in love with is how you didnt let pete get mikey back easy in our world. i mean, you didnt even really have them together at all in that universe which i thought drew a really clear line between them. but even though they didnt even come face to face until the end, it was...hopeful.

im gonna stop now before i break LJ or something. but bb. seriously. youve outdone yourself and possibly all of LJ with this one. be proud.

♥

EDITED: because after ALL OF THAT, i cant make the heart thing right at the end. *facepalm*