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So I need to choose two of my best poems for this poetry contest, and I don't know which two to pick. And I think I've narrowed it down to three. Maybe four. But if you would like to read them and tell me which two are the best, or how I could make them better, then go to the links below.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2740222
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2638386
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2486633
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2521484
Thank you very much for your help, if you do help. And no thanks if you don't? haha.
"Freedom. It isn't once, to walk out
under the Milky Way, feeling the rivers
of light, the fields of dark-
freedom is daily, prose-bound, routine
remembering. Putting together, inch by inch
the starry worlds. From all the lost collections"
-Adrienne Rich
Goodbye!
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2740222
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2638386
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2486633
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2521484
Thank you very much for your help, if you do help. And no thanks if you don't? haha.
"Freedom. It isn't once, to walk out
under the Milky Way, feeling the rivers
of light, the fields of dark-
freedom is daily, prose-bound, routine
remembering. Putting together, inch by inch
the starry worlds. From all the lost collections"
-Adrienne Rich
Goodbye!