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danahid

FIC: The Things You See and The Way You See Them (STXI, PG13)

Jul 23, 2009 10:07

I haven't written anything in over a year, and didn't expect to write a "five times" story when I finally re-found my inspiration. Oh well.

Title: The Things You See and The Way You See Them
Author: Danahid (danahid)
Fandom/Spoilers: STXI/Reboot
Summary: The art of observation
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Gen or Kirk/Spock (depends on which goggles you ( Read more... )

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Comments 122

argentdragon July 23 2009, 18:15:14 UTC

This was lovely. I like the way you left it a bit vague just what the relationship between Kirk and Spock is, and also the use of non-main crew POVs was awesome.

And, uh, would you like a Dreamwidth account? I have some invite codes available, and would be happy to give you one if you'd like it.

danahid July 23 2009, 18:16:36 UTC

I'd love one. Thank you so much for offering!

And thank you for the lovely feedback -- I'm glad the vagueness worked...

argentdragon July 23 2009, 21:28:17 UTC

Where would you like me to send your Dreamwidth invite?

danahid July 23 2009, 23:09:14 UTC

Could you send it to my gmail account, dani.aivazian@gmail.com? Thank you!!

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tigriswolf July 23 2009, 18:34:01 UTC

... wow. Dude.

This is beautiful.

danahid July 23 2009, 23:09:24 UTC

Thank you so much!

ellethill July 23 2009, 19:44:08 UTC

Oh, this was beautiful. I've always liked fics in whch one or several characters or ther relationship is seen through the eyes of another, and to have six such fics all at once, and written so very well, was an absolute treat. Thanks for sharing this!

danahid July 23 2009, 23:09:49 UTC

Thank you! I've always liked those kinds of fics too -- guess that's why I wrote it/them.

angels3 July 23 2009, 23:58:42 UTC

Lord this was so quietly intense I don't think I took a breath the whole time.

danahid July 24 2009, 14:56:59 UTC

Thank you! I was going for "intense", so YAY!

were_duck July 24 2009, 00:14:00 UTC

Oh my gosh, this was a punch in the gut. Beautiful characterizations for everyone, especially Scotty! And nice subtle building of the relationship between Spock and Kirk--the web of perspectives falling into place works really well here.

danahid July 24 2009, 14:57:42 UTC

I'm glad you thought the characterizations worked, especially Scotty's -- he was challenging. And that the relationship build worked. Thanks for your lovely feedback!