Naruto Fic: In Plain Sight 1/1

[damoyre_fics]

Title: In Plain Sight
Characters: Hinata, Naruto
Rating: G
Genre: gen, friendship, some humor
Setting: My own version of the Hinata/Naruto first meeting in Shippuuden
Spoilers: For the manga and the series, including the filler episodes
Disclaimer: I don't own the Naruto universe, just having a little fun with it.

A/N: Special thanks to babaca for

Comments

[rahi_1]

lol, she fainted! hahaha...
Ok, time to be serious. This is VERY well written, how long did it take u to write this? Very detailed, great job. I hope to read a lot more of ur spectacular writing in the future! XD

[damoyre]

how long did it take u to write this?

Hm. About four hours, total. All in one shot. The editing took a couple days - going back and revising stuff.

Very detailed, great job. I hope to read a lot more of ur spectacular writing in the future! XD

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed. :)

[moon_destiny]

You have no idea how much I love this fic right now...It's so subtle, and your characters are so CANON. :D I love how you've shown how they've grown; it doesn't seem angsty, but something that happened gradually, and for the better. And I loved the ending. It was so great and funny!

[damoyre]

I really appreciate your taking the time to read and comment! Glad you liked the ending. :)

[chichilein]

OH MY GOD
*fangasm* ;_;

that was a NICE piece of fanfiction! I agree with the comment over me it was in character - the whole story long. I LOVED how Naruto got irritated with himself *laughs* and that Hinata's new look made him tense ^^
This would be a better first meeting than the canon one.. meh... but well I'm happy you worte your version, I'm going to mem this.. keep on writing! :D

[damoyre]

I'm hoping that someday Kishimoto will give Hinata a chance with Naruto. I think she's adorable! :)

Thank you for reading!

[hidden_gems]

Oh... So. Much. Love!!

And you even incorporated bits about the BEST filler arc (if we forget the way it ends...)! I really think you did a wonderful job with characterization. Thank you so much, it was a great way to start the day!

[damoyre]

I really liked that filler arc. Shino is one of my favorite characters, and he doesn't get enough air time. :)

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the fic. Thank you!

[raven_mirta]

This was GREAT!

So adorable. Well-written with no OOC-ness in sight. Good job!

Maybe she just wasn't getting enough ramen in her diet! I love that line a lot for some reason. X]

[damoyre]

Yay! You guys are awesome. I'm glad the characterization worked for you. <3

And the ramen thing... *giggle* Maybe Naruto needs to take the girl out for lunch. ;)