Naruto Fic: Field Trip (Kakashi/Iruka, NC-17)

[damoyre]

Title: Field Trip 1/1
Authors: datenshiblue and damoyre
Pairing: Kakashi/Iruka
Rating: NC-17

Read it here. (Link goes to my fic lj)

Have I mentioned lately that I love bonne? ^__^

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Comments

[ayonoi]

DaMoyre, oh my goth!! Thank you for this wonderful fic. I left this at Bonne but I felt I should tell you what my impressions were. I so love Iruka sensei here. I am not joking when I tell you that from all the men in the series, no matter how handsome they are, from all I would choose Iruka sensei. He is such a lovely person inside and out.
And this story is just so perfect for him. *squeeee*

*passes out* ohh you guys are the best, this is what I've been looking for to combat this pointed blue time that I seem to be stuck. You have given me Iruka sensei with his heart of gold and kindness and his determination to be of service to his village. He is a fine ninja my friends and it just comes accross so clearly here. And Kakashi, with so much hidden pain that he sometimes feels the need to just mumble it in broke syllables, a bit of the despair he feels shining through the cracks. It just takes someone with a open heart to listen and pick up on that. How good for him to trust a bit into Iruka-sensei.

The lemon was so beautiful, full of real attraction and good feelings. *huggles* You are soo good to me. I truly loved it.

A few mistakes here and there. During the battle, did you mean "Kakashi cornered (the ninja) and the battle was vicious"? the sentence is incomplete. The title of Kakashi's book is Icha Icha Paradise. Ohh but honey, these mistakes do not retract from the wonderful writing.

I love you with this gift. I am leaving the same comment at Damoyre's.

Love you baby so much

[damoyre]

I so love Iruka sensei here.

So glad you liked him! My first attempt at Naruto fic, and it had to be him. Because...

I am not joking when I tell you that from all the men in the series, no matter how handsome they are, from all I would choose Iruka sensei. He is such a lovely person inside and out.

Yes yes yes! *snuggles* I would too. He's my love. He does indeed have a heart of gold. The others might be handsome, sure - but Iruka's isn't swiss cheese! I might be biased personally find him incredibly pretty. *_*

And this story is just so perfect for him. *squeeee*

Yaya! You're making me very happy with these comments! ^___^

*passes out* ohh you guys are the best, this is what I've been looking for to combat this pointed blue time that I seem to be stuck.

*pets* I'm so glad this helped a little, sweetie. *sends virtual chocolate and lotsa love your way*

You have given me Iruka sensei with his heart of gold and kindness and his determination to be of service to his village. He is a fine ninja my friends and it just comes accross so clearly here.

*purrs* *melts* Thank you.

And Kakashi, with so much hidden pain that he sometimes feels the need to just mumble it in broke syllables, a bit of the despair he feels shining through the cracks.

Don't you just want to reach out and hold him? I love that man. :)

A few mistakes here and there. During the battle, did you mean "Kakashi cornered (the ninja) and the battle was vicious"?

Ah - I think that part is "Kakashi cornered was Kakashi vicious" - is that what you're refering to?

Icha Icha Paradise.

I also thought it was Ichi Ichi. Oopsies! ;)

Thank you again for the comments. You're a doll. <333

[ayonoi]

"Ah - I think that part is "Kakashi cornered was Kakashi vicious" - is that what you're refering to?"

Yep, it looks incomplete but now I see that it is alright. Hit me will you XD.

*hugs you tight* You are so good to me.

[damoyre]

*hugs you tight* You are so good to me.

There's no such thing as being too good to your friends! ^__~

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