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Jun 27, 2006 21:32

How Two Boys Got Some (in Different POVs): A Portrait of Spencer Smith, Annoyed
PG13
Ryan/Brendon

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ryan/brendon, fic

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im_not_a_liquid June 28 2006, 04:48:11 UTC

lol

one900 June 28 2006, 04:52:01 UTC

i lol-ed at your comment, i don't know why.

im_not_a_liquid June 28 2006, 10:52:49 UTC

sorry, i didn't add that i loved your story

one900 June 29 2006, 04:35:13 UTC

hahah no no, i liked the comment the way it was! but thanks :)

callsigns June 28 2006, 04:57:33 UTC

That was really awesome. Sigh. I wish I was more coherent. AWESOME.

one900 June 29 2006, 04:35:29 UTC

ahahah. whatever dude, caps make up for everything. thanks!

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one900 June 29 2006, 04:36:31 UTC

spencer strikes me as a no-shit type of dude. all the wrist-flopping and hip-jutting is just misleading. ;)

illiterate June 28 2006, 05:26:48 UTC

The second scene is my favorite, mostly because of Spencer's last bit. And I just really like this. I am shit at feedback, but I like your style. It's sparse and very cool. Fucking cool like lemonade. The good kind, with just the right amount of sour.

So yes. Chloe likes.

one900 June 29 2006, 04:36:58 UTC

hahahha thanks! i think that's quite possibly the metaphor of the week.

i am glad for this.

clumsygyrl June 28 2006, 05:32:42 UTC

lovely little vignettes.

one900 June 29 2006, 04:37:12 UTC

:) thanks!