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dalehead

Walk on By VII

Jul 25, 2004 18:33

WALK ON BY - VII ( Read more... )

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_preciouswhore_ July 25 2004, 11:28:53 UTC

oh man.. this is getting good.. i'm excited.. keep up the good work!

dalehead July 25 2004, 11:39:28 UTC

By god, that was quick! Thanks very much, was just sitting here contemplating chapter 8 *g*

autumnaugur July 25 2004, 11:46:01 UTC

Yay! I am so happy to see more of this. I've gotten quite fond of cop!Orlando. And I'm happy that he realized that he treated Viggo badly. I'm looking for to the part where he get to make it up to Viggo. *grins*

And Bicknall is hilarous.

dalehead July 25 2004, 11:48:35 UTC

Bless your kind heart! Would it be awful of me to admit, am really enjoying my OCs! I knew it'd be fun to make them up rather than borrowing 'em from the LoTR cast and I love 'em! Oooh, just wait, I have a few tricks up my sleeve!!!

Thank you so much!

arrowthroughme July 25 2004, 12:47:18 UTC

I've been following this story for a while now and become quite fond of it. I hope Orlando is not only on time but actually willing to do something about his attraction. I never quite got what made him act with such cruelty towards Viggo in the first place.

I find it very difficult to imagine Viggo like that. Not because you don't make him believable, just because I don't really want to see him like that.

dalehead July 25 2004, 14:23:15 UTC

Ah but you see I don't think he did act cruelly to Viggo. He was thoughtless, yeah, but he's a cop, he's a bloke, he's homosexual but not metrosexual! He's a guy with targets to meet, he is ambitious and he wants to get on, he doesn't need added complications.

Since I started writing this I realise that every one of those people out on the streets has a story to tell. Most people end up on the streets because their lives have fallen apart. My Viggo is out there, living the life that I am describing, though perhaps sans the thriller element of this fic!

I don't know what else to say, I know my Viggorli are not necessarily what people expect but was what I wanted to write...

arrowthroughme July 25 2004, 14:59:23 UTC

Oh, I didn't meam it as negative criticism. Not at all. I just meant to say that I got emotionally involved in your story, which is a good thing.

dalehead July 25 2004, 15:01:03 UTC

No worries! Jeez! This commenting thing can be fraught with difficulties sometimes! *lol*

angiepen July 25 2004, 13:29:15 UTC

Eeeeps! Hurry!!!!

Angie, chewing her nails

dalehead July 25 2004, 14:23:50 UTC

Hi love! Have started chapter 8 tonight, hang on in there...

shaharazade July 25 2004, 14:50:55 UTC

Oh my God!! my poor Viggo, hurry Orlando, Viggo needs you to hold his hand, and make it all better!!!

Please write quickly. xxx (hugs) xxx

dalehead July 25 2004, 14:54:00 UTC

Hey love! Fret ye not, I have begun already...