Drabble - Getting in deep...

Apr 12, 2006 16:29

I am having a burst of productivity so am making hay while the sun shines. This is for littlegreenleaf. He wakes up with a start. He can hear the slow gentle breathing of a lover sleeping. Unconsciously, their breaths are synchronised, he fancies he can feel his hair lifting slightly on each outward sigh ( Read more... )

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littlegreenleaf April 12 2006, 20:39:55 UTC
Wow! Another wow! How do you do that? Convey so much in so few words?

And thank you for the dedication! Makes me feel part of this somehow...

*hugs you hard*

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dalehead April 12 2006, 22:27:00 UTC
Considering how verbose I am in real life, it's a miracle! And for the record, you are part of this, I've known you for yonks!

*hugs you breathless*

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glittered_sins April 12 2006, 20:58:37 UTC
*flails*

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dalehead April 12 2006, 22:27:30 UTC
*loves*

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koulagirl666 April 14 2006, 14:41:46 UTC
aiyi. *whimpers* this is deep. repeating the first paragraph, and then expanding on it, is an excellent touch. :)

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dalehead April 14 2006, 18:14:49 UTC
*g*

Thanks darling - came to me halfway through the writing of it.

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