Walk on By V

Jul 11, 2004 22:28

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ithil_dae July 11 2004, 15:00:22 UTC
You're so cruel :| I think the bottom of my heart just.. fell out. Dissapeared. *sob*

I might just be PMSing ;) But pleaaaaaaaaase update soon and make everything alright! Please please please!

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dalehead July 11 2004, 15:38:07 UTC
Hang on in there babe! Next part is with the beta, part after that still only half written! Vig's on a long old journey at the moment.... *g*

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angiepen July 11 2004, 15:16:46 UTC
Oh, good grief. Am I going to have to get out my two-by-four...?

Angie scowls and glances at Orlando.

At least Frank seems to have been able to hang on to his brain this morning. I hope he has the smarts, and the spine, to tell Orlando that he doesn't have to right to toss anyone out of his, Frank's, place.

Although, considering what the bitch in the heels just did and said, it might actually be in Viggo's best interests not to be seen with Orlando for a few days. But not like this. [glower]

Eagerly anticipating the next chunk,

Angie

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dalehead July 11 2004, 15:41:32 UTC
Karma, my dear, Karma! I'm sure what goes around will come around but poor Orlando, it's all happening at the moment and he acted in haste, just hope he doesn't repent in leisure - I have a feeling you're gonna want to slap me after you read the next chappie - which as I said above is with my gorgeous Ana, she's got a lot on at the moment *haven't you love* but it'll be up asap!

PS - thanks v much for your wonderfulness - I really appreciated your comments, sometimes I sit here and can't see the wood from the trees...

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koulagirl666 July 11 2004, 17:09:22 UTC
ow. who's tortured more, viggo or orlando?? only thing i don't like about this chapter is that it's hard to have sympathy for viggo 'cos it seems more orlando-centric... then again i might just be missing something.

what i do like is that all the orlando-emotion sets up something big, and the way you've written viggo's reaction is touching. i look forward to part vi.

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dalehead July 12 2004, 00:47:46 UTC
Well said you, baby! Poor Orlando it is - can't say very much without giving it all away but hang on in there, I know it's a slow burn but that's what the boys seemed to want...

Will give you a shout later, sweetie...

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f_lexi_ble July 11 2004, 17:15:07 UTC
I was all happy about a new part of the story and now I'm all sad. Poor Viggo nothing seems to go right for him, I am thinking it will be a while before things start looking up for him though.I 'm sure there is perfectly good explanstion for his illegal status...isn't there?

"Turning round he walked out of the pub, ignoring the little voice inside him that was telling him he’d been an arse and that he would miss his chats with Viggo."

Maybe Orlando should start listening to that little voice...

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dalehead July 12 2004, 00:51:09 UTC
Lexi, Lexi, it's a game of two halves! Is like when Liverpool are playing crap all through the first half, then suddenly in the latter stages of the second half, Gerrard walks (or should I say runs) in the footsteps of giants and the next thing we've scored - thus winning the match...

As I keep saying, hang on in there...

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f_lexi_ble July 12 2004, 05:11:04 UTC
Yes but what about the times they play like Premier League champions for ninety minutes and then let the other team score during injury time. I'm just saying... :)

You know I love the angst so bring it on...

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loves_bitch July 11 2004, 18:16:01 UTC
*sniffles* Damn you you just made me get all teary. you cruel cruel woman............more please *whimpers*

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dalehead July 12 2004, 00:53:26 UTC
*Hands you a tissue* Poor you! Next chappie with my awesome beta - trying to get on with the next bit but got a bit stuck!

More soon, though, I promise!

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