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Liam Gallagher/Josh Holloway - Taming Liam II

Sep 21, 2005 21:03

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TAMING LIAM II
by lexi_mirkwood and daleheadJosh Holloway/Liam Gallagher ( Read more... )

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koulagirl666 September 21 2005, 23:14:57 UTC

wow. that was electric. the atmosphere you set up at the start is astoundingly simple and it stays throughout the whole piece...
i like the way you've portrayed liam's confusion and josh's reaction. it's almost like josh is trying to be comforting without realising the role liam sees him in and that contrast works really well and makes the last line a lot deeper than it otherwise would have been.

well done girls, a worthy effort! :)

dalehead September 22 2005, 08:13:19 UTC

Thank you so much, cos I don't think anyone else is reading. And also thank you for my love e-message! I finally accessed it last night *hugs* You are wonderful.

We're loving the boys and piling on the angst. To be honest, I am aware that I am writing Liam as a bit of a cliche but he is such a lovely antidote and contrast to everything else I write. His issues are very real and as we develop their characters, they will come more to the fore!

Thanks again, darling! Love you.

koulagirl666 September 22 2005, 08:17:29 UTC

Of course I read!! And I make some of my teddy bears read too, but they can't type too good.

I'm glad you got the message... :) *hugs back* You're more wonderful.

I don't think Liam's a cliche. Sure, he's similar to everyone else, but not everyone would dare to write the things you do the way you do. You're *different* in a good way. It's refreshing, and you work really well with Lexi.

Love you too, sweetie. *double-hugs*

laeb October 4 2005, 04:36:53 UTC

you ok L? we haven't heard from you in a while...