Frightened...

[dalehead]

Oh dear, I just can't seem to stop can I? For my frustrated pixie who went AWOL... Oh and guys, this is made up...He is really angry with you and you know it. You are actually scared. You have never been scared of your master before. But this time you pushed too hard. You disobeyed an implicit order; you thought you were being clever. You thought

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[missmolly9]

Cool!

[dalehead]

Excuse me?

Cool?

Really Miss Molly! That's like picking up Hamlet and finding the words, "Okay mate?"

Would you like to try this again perchance?

*hugs*

And we need to chat!
Where are you?

[seekie]

Intense...

[dalehead]

Thanks love!

Hope you and yours are well...

*hugs*

[dalehead]

*hugs*
Was exorcising stuff!

[discord72]

Well ouch!

[dalehead]

*g* Was that a good ouch?

[koulagirl666]

Whoa. That's dark. But it has pretty glitter, too...

I really like the way you've moved from the physical pain to emotional pain, kept them separate. And I like the way you've shown that He still cares, even if you doesn't realise it. (Try that one in a grammar check!)
The other thing I really like is that you is scared of being dismissed before being scared of being severely hurt.

My pixie went away, too... except instead of writing, I can't write at all. *pouts*

[dalehead]

Darling, thank you so much for such well thought out feedback, I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.

Frustrated pixie was a nickname I used for mum - just to wind her up really. *laughs* And it did until she got used to it...

[koulagirl666]

You don't need to. I know. :)

:)