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dalehead

Walk on By XXI

Jan 14, 2008 20:51

WALK ON BY - XXI ( Read more... )

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tati January 14 2008, 21:56:06 UTC

that last line is perfect. no matter how much i'm still worried about people who might be after them, this little scene and line brought me peace of mind :)

dalehead January 14 2008, 22:02:52 UTC

Awww! *hugs*

They're very happy really and it's the little moments that count most I think.

Another Chapter - yippee!!!!!!! gattodoro January 14 2008, 22:45:58 UTC

1. I love the image of Orlando threatening to break George's arm.

2. Hurrah for a gay bloke who is a bloke and not some Stepford boyfriend who likes sewing

3. That said, can you get Viggo to pop round to do my housework (I'm handy for Waterloo)

4. Loved, loved, loved the kissing in the Pub. And the moment on the bridge. Speech is over-rated (mostly - Shakespeare et al excepted )

5. I've been through Tower Bridge on a Thames Sailing Barge - go me!

(Oh and check your mail - I spotted some typos, 'cos I'm like that).

Re: Another Chapter - yippee!!!!!!! dalehead January 14 2008, 22:50:47 UTC

*whines* Yes but you hid them from me! Can you bold them or something *g*

Oh and THANK YOU!

*hugs*

Re: Another Chapter - yippee!!!!!!! gattodoro January 14 2008, 23:00:54 UTC

I sent you a word doc with track changes turned on ...

No slashing of wrists, please, we have to take each game as it comes...

Re: Another Chapter - yippee!!!!!!! dalehead January 14 2008, 23:09:33 UTC

*g* Thanks darling! You are right and I am off to bed! Night!

alex_quine January 14 2008, 23:12:22 UTC

Very atmospheric and despite the welcome interlude on the bridge, the tension is ramping up nicely. Good to know that George is looking out for them - and I've never understood what pie and mash 'liquor' was until now. Thanks for posting.

dalehead January 15 2008, 06:51:30 UTC

Thank you. That was just what I was aiming for.

*beams*

doylebaby January 15 2008, 00:32:00 UTC

I loved this entire chapter to bits. Viggo's worry, Frank's knowing that he does and offering him some distraction.
Love Orlando not caring one bit who watches as he kisses Viggo.

I really adore this!

*hugs*

dalehead January 15 2008, 07:02:30 UTC

*beams* Thank you very much. I got my WOB mojo back!

*hugs*

bee_ta_baby January 15 2008, 01:12:39 UTC

*sigh* Damn, I do love your characters hon, still rich and varied. Truly a wonderful joy to read.
It's a dilemma though, here I am wishing for the next chapter seconds after finishing this one, and at the same time, wishing they'd never come. 'Fore as they do, so comes the end of this wondrous tale...

dalehead January 15 2008, 07:07:46 UTC

*hugs* Thank you my Bee-licious one! I am glad you're enjoying even after four years! Yes, nearly four years *giggles*

bee_ta_baby January 15 2008, 10:15:42 UTC

I'm curious babes; have you tagged the earlier entries or are they under memories? In the beginning, I'd not saved or copied, but now, I find a desire to re-read them, and keep them for future enjoyment

*gg* Pompous sounding enough :D *Hugs back*

Shit, four years?!?!?!? Can't believe we've known each other four years... *sigh*

dalehead January 15 2008, 10:18:29 UTC

http://dalehead.livejournal.com/110397.html#cutid1

There's all my fics - well most of them *g* But all of Walk on By is there!

I know! Four years!!!

*hugs and adores*