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dal_niente

Fic: Cold Fusion, Chapter 3

May 02, 2011 21:04

Fanfic: Cold Fusion, Chapter 3
Author: Dal Niente
Rating: T
Word Count: 2,841

( The two of them fall into a routine astonishingly quickly. )

fanfic: megamind, character: roxanne, megamind, fanfic: cold fusion

Comments 3

avaaricious May 4 2011, 13:09:29 UTC

There's so much to comment on in this chapter! Have to begin at the whole domesticity that Minion and Roxanne establish.

I love your attention to detail about Nibs (cute name) being an older version of a brainbot, and those little things like previous Megamind plans. I LOVE LOVE LOVE the way that Nibs communicates. That's frickin' awesome. So much yummy detail to pore over!

There's not too much detail about Jo at this stage, but it comes up later, so I'm cool with that. I like that her reaction to finding out that Roxanne has been seeing Bernard/Megamind; questioning whether she's been hurt, and how she found out. Another solid chapter.

dal_niente May 4 2011, 16:03:12 UTC

I am so so glad that you like Nibs! He was a lot of fun to write -- initially I considered researching old coding terminology, but decided Megs would have written his own (also I am lazy XD). I'm happy that you liked the way he "talks;" I wasn't sure if it would be confusing.

Jo was also fun to write, but a lot more stressful. Glad you like her in this chapter! ^^

avaaricious May 4 2011, 23:02:46 UTC

Nibs was adorable. I want him. :D