FIC: PoT - Hard Times, Desperate Measures, and Frilly Aprons {Fuji, Saeki, Yuuta}

[daisy_chan]

Title: Hard Times, Desperate Measures, and Frilly Aprons
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters: Fuji, Saeki, and Yuuta
Rating: PG
Genre: crack

Comments

[zoesque]

Daisy.

I LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH. ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY'RE ALL *DRAMADRAMA*OH HAY GUYZ! a;sldjkf AND LOW-FLYING PLANES. GOD.

I'm pretty sure I'm being dense at the moment, though, because the last line makes no sense to me at all. XD

BUT ON THE WHOLE IT'S BEAUTIFUL. I mean it, it's lovely, and not in a ahahailovedaisy'scrack sort of way. Such boys. *____*

[daisy_chan]

::RELIEF:: When you didn't answer my e-mails I had these thoughts of terror that it was horribly and you couldn't bring yourself to tell me it made you vomit all over your keyboard.

Last line... it's supposed to be around when Yuuta leaves and Fuji is all angsting over it, and basically saying that Yuuta resents Fuji, not only for the tennis thing, but also partially because of horrible things like dressing him up like a geisha when he's an ickle.
...Lemme try rephrasing it in the fic. >__>;

hee! I'm so glad you like it. I was worried because it's obviously OOC, but it's OOC because they're acting, Y/Y? XD

[zoesque]

I AM SO SORRY I DIDN'T ANSWER YOUR EMAILS. They're starred and everything in my inbox, but then my mom came back from my great-grandmother funeral and there were Stories About How Insane Ukrainian Orthodox Funerals Are and things like my mom being the lush of the family and yeah. Sidetracked. >_<

OOOOOH. See, I read that as FUJI'S resentment, not Yuuta's, so I was like, "WTF, other way around, Daisy!". Because it totally makes sense the way you explained it; the way the fic is worded is a bit confusion, or I just fail at reading comprehension, either way. XD

Yessss. And I can totally, completely see Saeki and Fuji acting this way when they were younger (and really, Fuji still does, just more subtly).

[daisy_chan]

It's okay. I'm just highly paranoid.
I'm so sorry about your greatgrandmother. You didn't mention she'd passed away. ::hugs::

No, I'm sure it's just my eternal struggle with being coherent. Is the change better?

They must have been insane children together. Yumiko was probably thrilled to get away from Chiba just so she wouldn't have to deal with the two of them anymore.... until Eiji shows up. XD
Yumiko: Oh god. This one isn't going to steal my dresses too, is he?
Eiji: *tilts head* Hoi?
Fuji: ^__^

[darth_claire]

Hah! so adorable! Yeah, I'd hold a grudge too if my brother dressed me up as a geisha! (well I wouldn't but my sister used to make me be the husband when we played house and I hated it so I can totally understand Yuuta!) Cute!

[daisy_chan]

I'm a younger sister too, so I understand Yuuta's pain. XD
Thank you~~!

[silverladys9sf]

That icon is uber love.

[daisy_chan]

Isn't it wonderful? Unfortunately, I never did find out who made it >___

[hamburgerjack]

XD Rocks. Now I'm just iamginign little Yuuta popping rock after rock in his mouth, hoping no one sees him.

Yuuta: *shifty eyes*eats one* :3

[daisy_chan]

haha! I liked the rocks myself. Yuuta clearly has the Fuji taste buds.

[trixie_chick]

THAT is so frackin' hilarious and cute and sweet and aw the end and SQUEE and thankyousomuch!!

^_________^

[daisy_chan]

Trixie~ <3 I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ^^

[featherfire]

Oh god, that was SO cute. I couldn't stop laughing. I especially loved the "oh cool that plane is flying low!" in the middle of Saeki's impassioned speech. That made me lol forever.

[daisy_chan]

lol. I'm glad you liked it!