Comments | daisyclickclack: [LOST - Ben/Sun] Sympathy for the Devil

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[LOST - Ben/Sun] Sympathy for the Devil

Apr 27, 2009 17:19

Title: Sympathy for the Devil
Author: buongiornodaisy
Fandom: Lost
Characters: Ben, Sun
Pairing: Ben/Sun
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,394
Summary: Two exiles learn to understand each other better. AU-ish.
Author's Notes: Much love for calluna and doihearawaltz for looking this over. ♥
Disclaimer: Do I look like Darlton to you? Of course not! I'm just one person. Alas.

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( In the weeks preceding their departure he had begun to act strangely: detached from everyone, quiet and given to long contemplations of the ocean. )

series: damaged goods, genre: romance, pairing: ben/sun [lost], fandom: lost, character: sun-hwa kwon, character: benjamin linus

Comments 14

khaman April 27 2009, 22:20:19 UTC

I'm weird with relationship fics, so I've got like no useful review basis - except that the dialogue, especially in the beginning, was excellent. I also liked the descriptions throughout. I think Sun is always an extremely curious person, so it makes sense that she'd kind of poke at him like this.

daisyclickclack April 27 2009, 22:21:47 UTC

Mental image of Sun poking Ben with a stick: engage!

crazymaryt April 27 2009, 22:55:55 UTC

I really enjoyed. Ben/Sun is a pairing that deserves more attention. I thought the whole thing felt like them, very in character. I hope you plan on some more with them.

buongiornodaisy April 27 2009, 22:56:56 UTC

Like Ben, I have plans. Watch this space. ;)

Thank you! ♥

crazymaryt April 27 2009, 22:57:37 UTC

I sure will!

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buongiornodaisy April 29 2009, 02:13:30 UTC

Thank you! I admit I was worried the prose would be a bit...too simplistic, but! ♥

keyserzozie April 28 2009, 06:43:10 UTC

Lovely. I've always thought these two deserved some time alone...

buongiornodaisy April 29 2009, 02:14:13 UTC

Alone time eh? *waggles eyebrows*

Thank you! ♥

violettehasagun April 28 2009, 18:58:39 UTC

Very nice indeed. There isn't enough fic with these two and you capture the idea of a relationship between them very well.

buongiornodaisy April 29 2009, 02:16:16 UTC

Thank you! ♥ As I said to crazymaryt, I have plans to write more, and I do hope more people write them!