It's very good honey, and you're right, definitely crazy towards the end. I love the sound patterning, and I'm sure this is unintentional, but it really calls to mind Tom Minchin's beat poem. Not in tone, clearly, but definitely in sound - which I think is a good thing, since his writing is absolutely brilliant despite the joking subject matter.
It leaves me wanting to know more, which I think is often the sign of an interesting story.
Well...I suppose technically it is intentional, but only in that I was attempting to write a beat poem and Minchin's are pretty much the epitome of beat-tastic beat poem.
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I'd go to jail, step on the third rail,
anything to never fail that pink polished finger nail.
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It leaves me wanting to know more, which I think is often the sign of an interesting story.
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