Additionally, Part 2: Additions Don't Make Themselves

[daintress]

Comments

[nyaza]

<3! Alice is love! No other way to put it, and again, your Ed is... amazing <3!!

I must admit though *blushes* that i didn't understand the last part *blush* blueprints? *blushes*

[daintress]

They're planning a major addition to the house, bb. They were just looking over the drawings when he arrived ... but Alice already knows which one he'll like best, so there's no point in him looking at them. Lol!

Thank you! ♥

[nyaza]

oh, i didn't know what it w3as that, now i get it <3! thnks ^-^!!

[daintress]

np :)

[sunlitstar]

I love your interpretation of the Cullens meeting Alice & Jasper - it was so amusing! Your Alice is a bit more hyperactive than when I write her, but she's very funny.

“At times she is capable of restraining herself into something close to normalcy.” And your Jasper is snarky! I love it!

Great job doll =)

Thanks!

[daintress]

Lol! I really struggled with how hyperactive Alice should be. She isn't this crazy in the books, but I figure she's probably calmed down a lot over the decades, and in the beginning I bet she was pretty intense. *grins unrepentantly*

And I think Jasper would be snarky in canon if we could just get to know him. I hope so, anyway. The whole family can't be divided into the sweethearts vs. Rosalie. Lol!

nifty

[daddy_dude]

I may not have any knowledge of the fic, but still an interesting read.

I can't wait to read something non-fan-fic...
I no longer have my original distasteful thoughts about fan-fic. I just want to see what kind of unknown world you'd populate with what unkown characters. That has got to be an interesting place to visit.

PS- I think "got on his nervous" should be "got on his nerves".

Re: nifty

[daintress]

Oh gosh! What an amateurish mistake. Thanks for pointing that out!

I can't wait to see what I'd come up with either. But I've got to get the fanfic out of my system. If I don't write it, the story lines keep haunting me in my sleep and it drives me crazy....

[dinos_cowboy]

lol, this was so funny, but still totally believable! I particularly like your depictions of Alice and Jasper. I can so imagine Alice being even more hyperactive than normal in all the excitement over finally meeting the Cullens. Love it!

[daintress]

Yeah, I was pretty careful trying to gauge Alice's hyperactivity, but she still ended up being a little out of control. Lol! Thanks very much!

[daintress]

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)