Embarrassment

Nov 05, 2007 17:04

twilight, fan fiction

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arsenalamy November 5 2007, 22:49:22 UTC
This is brilliant!

The interaction between them is hilarious. I particularly like this line:

“Whatdaya think, Jake? I could just about imprint on that pretty lady,” Embry said wickedly

And I see you've added it as a challenge - should be fun.

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daintress November 6 2007, 00:42:49 UTC
I did add it as a challenge. It was just WAY too fun not to share. Lol! Thanks for the great ideas!

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thisistony November 5 2007, 23:12:59 UTC
Omg. Why is this so awesome? XD I can't even contain myself. I'm laughing like an idiot in the middle of the lounge. 8D

"Quil, Quil, Quil, LOOK, Daddy got me a KITTEN!" *shoves ball of fur in his face*

I can so picture that. So perfectly, so clearly... I love her mom's subtle revenge against Quil for taking her daughter so early 8D

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daintress November 6 2007, 00:42:02 UTC
I HOPE her dad wouldn't be cruel enough to his one-day son-in-law to purchase a cat for her. Lol! But, you know, her mom is taking pix of him in pig-tails, so I don't guess there's much hope....

If you can picture it, you should WRITE it!

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thisistony November 6 2007, 02:35:05 UTC
He totally would, you know it 8D Every dad gets back at his son-in-law.

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dee_lirious November 5 2007, 23:24:39 UTC
Oh God, so much cute! *squeals*

This is absolutely adorable. Quil and Clarie are possibly the most amazing thing ever. :) I can't wait to see what others will write for the challenge.

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daintress November 6 2007, 00:40:19 UTC
Lol! I hope we get a lot of entries for that one. We could use some cute to break up all the angst. Lol!

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fuel_for_flight November 6 2007, 00:19:39 UTC
Oh, this is absolutely adorable! God love Quil and his Hello Kitty hair ties.

You know, I'd love to read a story that isn't so much about Bella as it about the pack. I'd love an insider's view of their lives. You should definitely think of writing it; you flesh out the boys so well, and I'd kill to see where you'd take a story like that.

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daintress November 6 2007, 00:39:11 UTC
Are you a closet Bell-hater? Are you? Lol!

I might one day be interested in writing such a story. I'm still in the middle of one that is crying out for attention, though, so it won't be any time soon.

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ilonga November 6 2007, 00:38:34 UTC
awww that was cute!!!

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daintress November 6 2007, 00:39:43 UTC
:) Thanks!

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