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Innocence, Day 5, Table A

Aug 26, 2009 10:07

Title: Innocence
Author: x-erikah-x
Prompt #5: Innocence
Prompt table: A
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Rating: PG
Character/Pairing: Sheppard, OC
Word count: 390
Disclamer: Stargate belongs to MGM

( Innocence )

rating: pg, author: x-erikah-x, table: a, fandom: stargate atlantis, genre: gen, genre: hurt/comfort, genre: angst

Comments 6

magaday August 26 2009, 20:05:28 UTC

Beautiful imagery here. I'm intrigued.

x_erikah_x August 26 2009, 20:12:20 UTC

Thanks. Conveying the image I had in my mind was the hard part.

abracah August 30 2009, 00:42:42 UTC

That was just entrancing. What happened? What will happen? Real or dream or hallucination? All these and more. You did a very good job conveying what he saw, heard, smelled and tasted.

x_erikah_x August 31 2009, 12:08:11 UTC

Thanks! I love exploring his senses. It gives such a mysterious mood.

tridget August 31 2009, 02:27:55 UTC

You HAVE to write more of this story. The scene is extremely compelling. It really drew me in.

x_erikah_x August 31 2009, 12:09:02 UTC

Thanks, lol. There are so many of these that I'll have to look over again. ^_^