Fic: Figuring it Out (Ch 8)

Dec 12, 2009 15:14


Chapter 8

It was Sunday morning and Tim was riding the elevator at work trying to balance a box of pastries and a tray holding his latte and a hot chocolate from the coffee shop down the block. He was mentally chiding himself for coming in when the team wasn’t scheduled to.

This is such a dumb idea. He’s probably not even here. He had a date ( Read more... )

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lilacs_roses December 12 2009, 23:35:51 UTC
I haven't commented on this series at all but I want you to know that I HAVE been following/reading it and... I love it.

Especially your putting together this entire case along with Tony and Tim's 'figuring it out'! Nicely and well done! Looking forward to more :)

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daily_musings12 December 13 2009, 20:31:59 UTC
I am so glad that you're enjoying the story!

We're almost at the home stretch now, and hopefully these two kids will finally, FINALLY get together.

I feel like I'm torturing them! Next chapter should be up in a day or so.

Thanks for reading :)

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windandsummer December 13 2009, 01:55:25 UTC
Wow this story is oh so good. I really like the fact that you have a side story going on, in the mist of the developing feelings. Thanks so much for sharing.~bee

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daily_musings12 December 13 2009, 20:34:31 UTC
Thanks for the compliments and reviewing.

The side story was giving me a bit of trouble, but hopefully it all still makes sense!

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waystar December 13 2009, 03:26:53 UTC
This is great. The case is as compelling as the developing relationship! I look forward to reading more.

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daily_musings12 December 13 2009, 20:38:03 UTC
Thanks :) I'm glad that the case is interesting and isn't taking up too much of the story (although it should hopefully wrap up soon).

Glad you're enjoying it!

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murgy31 December 14 2009, 05:43:40 UTC
I loved this!

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samueljames December 15 2009, 15:30:36 UTC
Interesting case chapter, love Tony spotting details before McGee because I have a soft spot for competent Tony.

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