I threw in The Tale of Mary Sue and Gary Stu for laughs.
Grade 10.
16 of 69 sentences are hard to read. 8 of 69 sentences are very hard to read. 23 adverbs. Aim for 9 or fewer. 3 words or phrases can be simpler. 12 uses of passive voice. Aim for 14 or fewer.
Grade 10.
16 of 69 sentences are hard to read.
8 of 69 sentences are very hard to read.
23 adverbs. Aim for 9 or fewer.
3 words or phrases can be simpler.
12 uses of passive voice. Aim for 14 or fewer.
my work here is done.
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*Intrigued.*
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