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Apr 12, 2015 18:58

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rae00 April 13 2015, 06:06:21 UTC
I threw in The Tale of Mary Sue and Gary Stu for laughs.

Grade 10.

16 of 69 sentences are hard to read.
8 of 69 sentences are very hard to read.
23 adverbs. Aim for 9 or fewer.
3 words or phrases can be simpler.
12 uses of passive voice. Aim for 14 or fewer.

my work here is done.

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rae00 April 13 2015, 06:08:40 UTC
The rest of my stuff averages grade seven.

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dagronrat April 13 2015, 16:28:11 UTC
The tale of Mary Sue and Gary Stu? :?

*Intrigued.*

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rae00 April 13 2015, 17:34:02 UTC
dagronrat April 14 2015, 19:52:47 UTC
HA. XD I'd forgotten about that! Thankees! :D

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rae00 April 14 2015, 19:53:24 UTC
:P

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