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Which sounds better, "External Monologue" or "Internal Dialogue"?
EDIT:
This question was about a webcomic I'm thinking of making. I was going to make up some prototype scripts and then show all y'all, but then I realized that I have no way of actually doing the art part.
Anyway, here are the first two scripts. Just picture them laid out in four panels.
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Comic 1
Panel 1:
T: Today is a beautiful day, don't you think?
Panel 2:
D: I think that you're using a clichéd opinion of the outside world to mask the hopelessness of your inner insecurities and emotional problems.
Panel 3:
(Pause)
Panel 4:
T: Today is going to suck.
D: It's looking up.
Comic 2
Panel 1:
T: I can't decide how good I want to look today.
D: I suppose looking your best is out of the question?
Panel 2:
T: Well, I don't think I'm going to meet anyone new today. And my old friends will treat me the same no matter how much gel I put in my hair.
D: So what's the problem?
Panel 3:
T: There's always the chance that someone new will come along-
D: Who will have sex with you.
T: Whose company I would enjoy.
D: To have sex with.
Panel 4:
T: ...to have sex with.
D: Enjoy your gel.
Comments? Critiques?
Oh, and the only reason I used "T" and "D" is because that if I were to put these up, I wouldn't want to change the domain name. (www.thomasanddarwin.com)
EDIT:
This question was about a webcomic I'm thinking of making. I was going to make up some prototype scripts and then show all y'all, but then I realized that I have no way of actually doing the art part.
Anyway, here are the first two scripts. Just picture them laid out in four panels.
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[][]
Comic 1
Panel 1:
T: Today is a beautiful day, don't you think?
Panel 2:
D: I think that you're using a clichéd opinion of the outside world to mask the hopelessness of your inner insecurities and emotional problems.
Panel 3:
(Pause)
Panel 4:
T: Today is going to suck.
D: It's looking up.
Comic 2
Panel 1:
T: I can't decide how good I want to look today.
D: I suppose looking your best is out of the question?
Panel 2:
T: Well, I don't think I'm going to meet anyone new today. And my old friends will treat me the same no matter how much gel I put in my hair.
D: So what's the problem?
Panel 3:
T: There's always the chance that someone new will come along-
D: Who will have sex with you.
T: Whose company I would enjoy.
D: To have sex with.
Panel 4:
T: ...to have sex with.
D: Enjoy your gel.
Comments? Critiques?
Oh, and the only reason I used "T" and "D" is because that if I were to put these up, I wouldn't want to change the domain name. (www.thomasanddarwin.com)