nanowrimo snippet/cookie

Dec 18, 2004 16:14


heya guys, ok, So I'm gonna post my first paragraph of my still-in-progress NaNoWriMo story. If you think I should continue it, please comment. If you don't think I should continue, comment and tell me why.

Chapter one: Wounds )

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copinggoggles December 18 2004, 13:27:48 UTC
It stands damn nicely as a paragraph, but... kinda need a little more than that to get a feel for the thing, I think.

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daarmey December 18 2004, 13:28:43 UTC
thank you sweetie. I honestly...I don't know where my cutoff point should be.

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paranoidkitten December 18 2004, 13:38:06 UTC
Am intrigued, but like Sophie pointed out, 'tis quite short and it's hard to have a I-think-you-should-definitely-continue-or-not sort of opinion based on it. :)

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