Fic: Letting it Out

Jan 13, 2009 23:53

Title: Letting it Out
Rating: PG-13 for a bit of language
Word Count: 2144
Pairing: Barney/Robin
Spoilers: Post 4.12 "Benefits"
Description: Barney finally goes to a therapist, post-"Benefits".
Author's Note: Everyone and their grandmother seems to be doing "Benefits" fics. And yesterday the only two things I watched were "Benefits" and Antwone ( Read more... )

fanfiction, tv: himym

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4th_duckling January 14 2009, 05:21:21 UTC
Hurray! Dr. Grossbard is back! that had bugged me, too, Lily telling him to see a shrink when he mentioned one in intervention.
loved the inclusion of Feely and how clear it is that Barney's been *needing* this, bad.
I kind of want a Feely the Share Bear for me... so cute! :D

also...please continue? do next week's session? maybe?

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da_phoenix13 January 14 2009, 05:39:28 UTC
>I kind of want a Feely the Share Bear for me... so cute! :D

I think if we all had a Feely the Share Bear to hug when we're down, our lives might be a little less complicated. =D

>also...please continue? do next week's session? maybe?

Hmm... I actually hadn't thought of that. Maybe his next session can be set after next week's episode? Make kind of an ongoing series thing out of it?

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drcorncobb January 14 2009, 05:40:30 UTC
Oh, that was lovely, so well-written and a perfect continuation of last night's episode. My favorite line:

He shook his head in disbelief. “After all these years, he’s going to be the one to teach me how to live.”

Brilliant!

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da_phoenix13 January 14 2009, 06:52:43 UTC
Oh, thank you! Such kind feedback, and I always love hearing what people's favorite parts were. =D

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brite_city January 14 2009, 05:59:19 UTC
Really great job. Lily is such a good friend, I can see her forcing him to see someone, especially if she found out about the tv-smashing.
And I too would love to see a follow-up session to this. =)

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da_phoenix13 January 14 2009, 06:55:45 UTC
I'm actually seriously considering some kind of follow-up now. This idea literally came to me out of nowhere for this episode, and I think it might stand up well enough on its own, but... we'll see if next week's episode has any potential? I don't know what I'd come up with if left to my own devices for things Barney could talk about in his therapy sessions.

And thanks for the feedback!

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snogged January 14 2009, 06:00:49 UTC
Great storytelling :)

And I'm a sucker for stories that feature people in my future profession. Go Dr. Grossbard! I liked his technique of just letting Barney talk and him pretty much pretending not to be there.

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da_phoenix13 January 14 2009, 06:58:23 UTC
Oh, thank you!

Out of curiosity, have you seen the movie Antwone Fisher? Because that movie's basically all about the relationship between therapists and their patients, and we were discussing it in my class today, which might have been part of the inspiration behind this fic. Anyway, if you haven't already seen it, I recommend it.

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snogged January 14 2009, 14:37:04 UTC
I haven't seen that movie yet, but I'll definitely check it out :)

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roland44 January 14 2009, 07:16:02 UTC
That was so good =) I loved every little bit of it...you know Barney's never gonna give up Feely ;)

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da_phoenix13 January 14 2009, 16:05:24 UTC
Of course he didn't give up Feely. Who would? He's so cute! =D

So glad you liked it!

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