Fic: The Oncoming Storm (Slash, AU, Janto 29/40 Act 2/6)

[d8rkmessngr]

Author: d8rkmessngr
Pairing: Jack/OMC, Jack/?, Jack/Ianto eventually, het and slash
Rating: NC-17 (betaed)
Summary: He left Jack on the game station. Abandoned. But then…he came back…different. An AU look on what happens if things happened differently. Doctor Who 'verse with Torchwood later on. Be sure to read the warnings.

Comments

[jesslin]

Maybe someone mentioned, and I missed it, but Jack seems a little confused who he has for Secret Santa - it's Tosh on the slip of paper in the very beginning, but Gwen's chimes when they're discussing what gifts they bought.

Mind you, I had to read through twice before I even cared to point it out. Because, you know, Ianto does sympathy wonderfully well :) *And* with a fresh shirt (the cheeky monkey) :D You have seriously compromised my productivity at work; I had to go back and read all the previous chapters. Yer Evil!!

[d8rkmessngr]

Eh? That might be a plot snag at my part....Can you point out Gwen's part that had puzzled you and I can make note of it to fix. I've got a few Britishisms to fix anyway. Good eye.

:)

[schnuffie]