don't leave me burning
Title: Don't Leave Me Burning
Written by: d1Loui
Fandom: Original Story
Genre: Angst
Rating: K
Warning/ Notes: A not really thought out plot; grammatical errors
Copied from my DeviantArt account. Yes, yes, don't worry. It is my account. So it's not stealing, or plagiarizing, or any of that stuff... or is it? I don't know. Either way, hope you guys like this (supposedly) angsty piece. :)
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I gave my all to you.
I gave you a piece of myself and you had held me with such care that made me feel as though I was the most precious thing in your world. Your fingers on my skin, caressing me gently, felt warm and comfortable.
You had whispered sweet nothings in my ear and I believed them. I drank in your words as though it was my last lifeline. I held unto your promises, telling myself that you will never leave me; that you were unlike the others who had said the same things and had left me on my own.
I drowned in your bright eyes, those eyes that I never got tired of looking at; those eyes of yours that I came to love. They showed me myself; a reflection of me. And whenever I saw myself in your eyes, I always thought that perhaps I was the only one you could see. I deluded myself into thinking I was your world as you were mine.
You knew all my secrets; I told you everything. You never told me any of yours. I pretended to understand. I continued on thinking that you weren't ready to pour out your soul to me. I waited patiently as I continued spilling every little secret I had. I continued until there was nothing left to hide.
And when you finally had all of me, you smiled.
I smiled back.
You laughed.
I laughed with you.
But soon, laughter had turned to screams as you crushed me.
In your hands, you held my heart.
You continued to break me as you smiled that wonderful smile of yours.
I dropped down to my knees, my eyes glued to you. My eyes begging you. Pleading. Asking.
Why?
You continued smiling as you bent down to my level.
You caressed my face with your blood-stained hands. My blood.
You kissed me softly, gently.
You placed a kiss on my forehead.
My closed eyes.
My tear-stained cheeks.
My nose.
And then to my lips.
You lingered there, letting me taste you. Letting me feel the curve of your lips as you found joy in my sorrow.
Your kisses burned me.
You pulled away, and I slumped to the ground. I watched as you dropped all the pieces of my heart, one by one, in front of me.
You laughed at the pitiful expression on my face as I cry out.
A match lit.
Both you and I watched the flame dance.
Then you dropped it.
I heard you laugh as I scream.
I stared at you as you began to walk away.
As I felt myself burning, you looked back.
"I love you."
Written by: d1Loui
Fandom: Original Story
Genre: Angst
Rating: K
Warning/ Notes: A not really thought out plot; grammatical errors
Copied from my DeviantArt account. Yes, yes, don't worry. It is my account. So it's not stealing, or plagiarizing, or any of that stuff... or is it? I don't know. Either way, hope you guys like this (supposedly) angsty piece. :)
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I gave my all to you.
I gave you a piece of myself and you had held me with such care that made me feel as though I was the most precious thing in your world. Your fingers on my skin, caressing me gently, felt warm and comfortable.
You had whispered sweet nothings in my ear and I believed them. I drank in your words as though it was my last lifeline. I held unto your promises, telling myself that you will never leave me; that you were unlike the others who had said the same things and had left me on my own.
I drowned in your bright eyes, those eyes that I never got tired of looking at; those eyes of yours that I came to love. They showed me myself; a reflection of me. And whenever I saw myself in your eyes, I always thought that perhaps I was the only one you could see. I deluded myself into thinking I was your world as you were mine.
You knew all my secrets; I told you everything. You never told me any of yours. I pretended to understand. I continued on thinking that you weren't ready to pour out your soul to me. I waited patiently as I continued spilling every little secret I had. I continued until there was nothing left to hide.
And when you finally had all of me, you smiled.
I smiled back.
You laughed.
I laughed with you.
But soon, laughter had turned to screams as you crushed me.
In your hands, you held my heart.
You continued to break me as you smiled that wonderful smile of yours.
I dropped down to my knees, my eyes glued to you. My eyes begging you. Pleading. Asking.
Why?
You continued smiling as you bent down to my level.
You caressed my face with your blood-stained hands. My blood.
You kissed me softly, gently.
You placed a kiss on my forehead.
My closed eyes.
My tear-stained cheeks.
My nose.
And then to my lips.
You lingered there, letting me taste you. Letting me feel the curve of your lips as you found joy in my sorrow.
Your kisses burned me.
You pulled away, and I slumped to the ground. I watched as you dropped all the pieces of my heart, one by one, in front of me.
You laughed at the pitiful expression on my face as I cry out.
A match lit.
Both you and I watched the flame dance.
Then you dropped it.
I heard you laugh as I scream.
I stared at you as you began to walk away.
As I felt myself burning, you looked back.
"I love you."