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Original fiction: A Job Well Done

Oct 25, 2009 01:46

Title: A Job Well Done
Words: 228
A/N: A taste from my original world. This is the one I'll be mostly writing in for mini_nanowrimo. This was written as a test. Original work here, please don't steal.

( The bullet shattered the stained glass window )

original fiction, chrysopoeia

Comments 4

yanzadracan October 25 2009, 11:04:22 UTC

"Squishy explosion". That tickled my sense of the absurd. Successful test IMO.

cyphersushi October 25 2009, 13:03:36 UTC

Thank you for taking time and reading honey, I'm glad you think it was successful :)

honeyjojames October 25 2009, 13:05:49 UTC

Oooh, intriguing! I love your details and descriptions!

cyphersushi October 25 2009, 13:11:00 UTC

Thanks! It's tricky to get the right amount of detailing in there so that is very nice to hear :) Thanks for reading and commenting!