Important note: Suspend your disbelief. Seriously, dude. I can't make it any less weird, so I stopped trying. I'm kinda sick of looking at it anyway
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Do you have ANY idea of what you did to me with this awesome fic? It’s wonderful. The chemistry between Sam and Sawyer is as strong as I could dream it could be, and that you made them meet in this Sawyer as a bartender AU of yours is just perfect!!! You managed to develop/expose Sawyer more, and Sam…. God. It’s great.
Watch out, this comment will be long! Lol!
he puzzled over exactly what darkness the singer seemed to be tapping into.
And
cool but with something dangerous bubbling beneath the surface, sometimes the heat creeping in with a rasp or, even more rarely, a sublime thickness and deepness of sound. He looked and sounded about like Sawyer felt most of the time, but he was less afraid to own up to it, let it go. It made Sawyer oddly nervous for him, but he couldn't stop watching.
Oh yes. Love the description of Sam! Guh! And every description about how he sings, how he moves, the way they play the songs (and the interactions with the other band members.). It brings you right into the action!
he was built more like a running back, maybe a pitcher. Tall, lean, cut.
Ding ding ding!!! Lol! That hit the kink-o-meter alright! Lol! damn. Made me want to resuscitate my baseball AU and throw him in the team, and Dean too, as a cocky, hot-dog power hitter! Lol!
That first contact, with the eyes first, then the shooter, and then
Sawyer couldn't help it. For the first time that evening, a genuine smile came over his face, and he flashed a grin at this strange singer and said, "If you have to ask…"
He sauntered back to the bar very intentionally, determined both to ignore the kid and get his attention, all at once.
Perfect Sawyer! W00t! and I love how you described how Sawyer reads people and does a shape-shifter number on them, adapting to what they want to see. And how Sam is fascinating because he cannot read him. Greatly done. The touch of him cleaning the same glass at the end of the Led Zeppelin song was awesome.
Sawyer fiddled with the bottles in front of him. He said, "Am I supposed to think you're psychic?"
"What?" he said, for a moment wide-eyed, bewildered.
OMG, that’s great! LOL! Poor Sam, I can imagine his confusion there!
I love their chatting and flirting. It is a bit awkward at first, but realistic. Then it went into the land of the the GUH-hot
"Good," he said, rolling off the bar stool. "Give me time to sober up a little."
"Yeah?"
He leaned in. "I give better head when I'm not drunk off my ass."
God I love slutty!Sam *holds close to heart*
"I feel like I know you, Sawyer? Why is that?"
because he’s another version of Dean, Sammy! that's why! Lol!
sorry to butt in...keyweegirlieJanuary 3 2007, 23:25:36 UTC
Ding ding ding!!! Lol! That hit the kink-o-meter alright! Lol! damn. Made me want to resuscitate my baseball AU and throw him in the team, and Dean too, as a cocky, hot-dog power hitter! Lol!
YOU'RE the ONE that was writing that baseball AU?!? God, I loved that thing...you should definitely resuscitate it. I'll bribe you even, what do you want? *giggles*
Re: sorry to butt in...gottalovevJanuary 5 2007, 17:11:51 UTC
lol! yeah, I did fondle with that... and now, making icons of Jared pitching got me thinking, and Jack would catch for him, and Sawyer would be jealous and.... argh! it may live again!
Re: sorry to butt in...keyweegirlieJanuary 5 2007, 20:41:14 UTC
I'm serious...what will it take to get you to write more? I loved J/S and all the other Losties in that AU...and adding in the J/J aspect would just melt my mind into goo.
*giggles* -C-
I wish I could use my new Jared/baseball icon, but I've gotta wait until after the voting is finished...*sighs*
Watch out, this comment will be long! Lol!
he puzzled over exactly what darkness the singer seemed to be tapping into.
And
cool but with something dangerous bubbling beneath the surface, sometimes the heat creeping in with a rasp or, even more rarely, a sublime thickness and deepness of sound. He looked and sounded about like Sawyer felt most of the time, but he was less afraid to own up to it, let it go. It made Sawyer oddly nervous for him, but he couldn't stop watching.
Oh yes. Love the description of Sam! Guh! And every description about how he sings, how he moves, the way they play the songs (and the interactions with the other band members.). It brings you right into the action!
he was built more like a running back, maybe a pitcher. Tall, lean, cut.
Ding ding ding!!! Lol! That hit the kink-o-meter alright! Lol! damn. Made me want to resuscitate my baseball AU and throw him in the team, and Dean too, as a cocky, hot-dog power hitter! Lol!
That first contact, with the eyes first, then the shooter, and then
Sawyer couldn't help it. For the first time that evening, a genuine smile came over his face, and he flashed a grin at this strange singer and said, "If you have to ask…"
He sauntered back to the bar very intentionally, determined both to ignore the kid and get his attention, all at once.
Perfect Sawyer! W00t! and I love how you described how Sawyer reads people and does a shape-shifter number on them, adapting to what they want to see. And how Sam is fascinating because he cannot read him. Greatly done. The touch of him cleaning the same glass at the end of the Led Zeppelin song was awesome.
Sawyer fiddled with the bottles in front of him. He said, "Am I supposed to think you're psychic?"
"What?" he said, for a moment wide-eyed, bewildered.
OMG, that’s great! LOL! Poor Sam, I can imagine his confusion there!
I love their chatting and flirting. It is a bit awkward at first, but realistic. Then it went into the land of the the GUH-hot
"Good," he said, rolling off the bar stool. "Give me time to sober up a little."
"Yeah?"
He leaned in. "I give better head when I'm not drunk off my ass."
God I love slutty!Sam *holds close to heart*
"I feel like I know you, Sawyer? Why is that?"
because he’s another version of Dean, Sammy! that's why! Lol!
♥
*off to comment on next part*
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Thanks, dear! I'm SO glad you liked it. This story made me nervous for some reason, so I'm glad it works so far.
And, damn, wouldn't Sam make the sexiest baseball player. *drools* And Dean, too.
"I feel like I know you, Sawyer? Why is that?"
because he’s another version of Dean, Sammy! that's why! Lol!
Precisely!
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YOU'RE the ONE that was writing that baseball AU?!? God, I loved that thing...you should definitely resuscitate it. I'll bribe you even, what do you want? *giggles*
*smoochies*
-C-
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bribe??? lol! I'll think about it!
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*giggles*
-C-
I wish I could use my new Jared/baseball icon, but I've gotta wait until after the voting is finished...*sighs*
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