Fic: The Girl Who Isn't Kate

[cynthia_arrow]

Title: The Girl Who Isn't Kate
Pairings: Shannon/Jack/Kate, with J/K/S and mentions of Shannon/Boone
Rating: PG-13 for mostly language
Summary: What Shannon sees when she watches Jack and Kate. Set mid season one. 2400 words.
Note: This is for Queen didibreakit. I've been out of practice lately with the Jack/Kate, so I thought I'd get back into it,

Comments

[gottalovev]

oh, she's good. I love when we get her POV. Everything you wrote here is so in character, all her observations about Jack, Kate and Sawyer and even Boone so spot on. I love her banter with Sawyer, he's no fool either.

excellent fic, as always. you are amazing ♥

[cynthia_arrow]

Thanks so much! I wasn't sure about this one. It's good to hear it worked well enough, especially the observations Shannon makes about the other characters.

*giggles* that was classic Sawyer.

[keyweegirlie]

"...He calls out to her, "You wanna come over here and help me make Freckles jealous, too?"

*giggles* that was classic Sawyer.

I really liked Shannon in this story...maybe a Shannon/Jack relationship should've happen on the show. Don't get me wrong I kinda liked Shannon/Sayid relationship, but....Shannon needed...oh hell forget both Jack and Sayid, she needed a smartass like Sawyer. Every woman Everyone on that island needs a little Sawyer lovin'. LOL Or at least I wanna see/watch a little Sawyer lovin' that doesn't include the theft of a gun.

I should really stop rambling now. Loved the story like usual....
~C~

Re: *giggles* that was classic Sawyer.

[cynthia_arrow]

No doubt--Shannon and Sawyer could be combustible...if you get past everything that happened in "Confidence Man." :) Actually, I've never written much of them, because it seems like it would just be easy sex and no strings, and I SUCK at that sort of story.

Or at least I wanna see/watch a little Sawyer lovin' that doesn't include the theft of a gun. Here's hoping we get that next season. (Although, it took them two seasons to let anybody get any on camera, so I'm not holding my breath.)

Umm...this was supposed to be a reply to your comment about the story, wasn't it? :) Thanks for reading it!

Re: *giggles* that was classic Sawyer.

[keyweegirlie]

Umm...this was supposed to be a reply to your comment about the story, wasn't it? :) Thanks for reading it!

haha...it's ok, I tend to ramble on and on at times as well. ;-P Thanks for writing it.

~C~

[elise_509]

I looooooooove you so much right now, I can't even begin to tell you.

Jack/Shannon makes me so happy! I know this is only a one-parter, but is there any chance I could plea and beg you to write more? Your Shannon is so perfect and I love how she sees Jack, sees all of them, really. Your descriptions of Jack were just completely fantastic and Sawyer and his "come-fuck-me-darlin'" twang were also beyond great. I would love to see Jack and Shannon explore each other more and for Kate become the girl who isn't Shannon. *makes puppy dog face*

thanks for this wonderful story! :)

[cynthia_arrow]

Um, would you take a stand-alone Jack/Shannon story intead of a sequel? I kinda wrote one last night...

I'm really glad you thought this story worked. I thought maybe it was too jumbled up with characters and issues to work very well. Thanks for the feedback, dear! ♥

[inthekeyofd]

You all are making me miss Shannon!! This is so good, perfect PERFECT Shannon here, and am I wrong that I really like it that Kate walked away in a huff.

You know, as much as he may be screwed up, Sawyer really was like Shannon, more than she may have cared to think of..both smartasses, both on the outside, both misunderstood.

Loved this!!!

[cynthia_arrow]

Yep...I kinda wanted Kate to be annoyed by the end of the story, too. :)

As someone once said in comments to a Jack/Shannon story, Shannon is so much like Sawyer that nobody around here should object to writing her with Jack. Can you imagine, though, the snarking if Sawyer and Shannon ever got together. :D

Thanks!

[cmonkatiekatie]

oh, this is so very tangled. I love every bit of it.

[cynthia_arrow]

Thank you. :)