patd ficlet: Brendon/Spencer, PG

Jul 15, 2008 14:19

Title: only one of them written in the music ( Read more... )

rpf: bandom: patd, pairing: brendon/spencer

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mintyfiend July 15 2008, 22:01:17 UTC
They embrace over the piano bench, an awkward clash of arms that only ends when they finally settle and submit to each other's mostly steady hands.

That is such a beautiful line in a piece full of beautiful lines. I love the thought of Brendon teaching Spencer piano and how you've captured it here. Your Spencer voice is simply awesome.

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cynthia_arrow July 16 2008, 23:28:24 UTC
Thanks so much. For some reason, Spencer's voice seems the easiest for me to slip into. :)

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themoononastick July 15 2008, 23:57:46 UTC
Oh oh, this is so much better than my attempt, SO much better. I love your Spencer voice and I love his slow realisation and Brendon's patience. And the final paragraph is just gorgeous. ♥

(also, *reminds*. There needs to be more piano teaching fic.More, I say)

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cynthia_arrow July 16 2008, 23:30:21 UTC
Not better. Not! Just different. I love how Spencer is in yours, the way he's just so happy to be near him. :)

Thanks, babe. ♥

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cmonkatiekatie July 16 2008, 08:20:38 UTC
God. God, there is just so much in here. My heart. And your title line? It's maybe possible I clutched at my heart. Maybe.

You write so, so beautifully. Really. It's actually kind of intimidating. Or it would be if you weren't so nice about it.

I am so very glad I have a you!

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cynthia_arrow July 16 2008, 23:31:37 UTC
Meep. *clutches heart, too*

Aww. You're adorable, you know? *tackles*

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delicatelight July 18 2008, 03:19:41 UTC
Oh, wow. This was beautiful.

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cynthia_arrow July 21 2008, 00:20:09 UTC
Thanks for reading! :)

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mrsquizzical August 9 2008, 22:11:57 UTC
from the moment i read that spencer was taking piano lessons i wanted fic about it!

yay!

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cynthia_arrow August 11 2008, 21:01:05 UTC
I kind of couldn't resist. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading. :)

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